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Night Breeze

through sunless hours
it sneaks in the open window like a thief, 
it's cool tendrils caresses
the tangle limbs upon the bed. 

throughout the shadowed dim lit room
a lullaby it sings, 
fragrant with the scent of love.

12/30/2017
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Blanca Avatar
January 2, 2018 at 3:54 PM
Eve, Wow you have really touched my insides with your touching poem. The style, the symbolism and the words tell volumes. Thanks.
Vaso Avatar
December 31, 2017 at 10:16 PM
This is so oh la la, romantic and sensual, loved it!
Dietrich Avatar
December 31, 2017 at 6:56 PM
this so beautiful, Eve! Happy New year's EVE to you!!!
Andresen Avatar
December 31, 2017 at 3:14 PM
- A lovely poem Eve, I enjoy reading this :) - Great - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
One Avatar
December 31, 2017 at 11:02 AM
This is lovely...
Swartz Avatar
December 31, 2017 at 10:09 AM
Yes i can feel it through your words. A wonderful and brilliant write.
Tripp Avatar
December 31, 2017 at 4:29 AM
Wow, Eve. This is impressive. Love how I can visualize the breeze.
Pigeon Tart Avatar
December 31, 2017 at 12:34 AM
A beautiful whispering caress of a poem Eve xomo
Gupta Avatar
December 30, 2017 at 11:27 PM
Bordering on surreal ... Beautiful, Eve ...
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