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Night Breeze

Gazing at the stars in a beautiful night sky, she feels the silent wind slowly passing by. As the cool gentle breeze caresses her skin, it ruffles her dress again and again. As the waves from the ocean cover the sand, the wind sways her hair as she brushes it with her hand. She stands with a smile in the light of the moon, hoping the breeze will come back soon. Copyright 2007 INSIGHTS by R. A. Jones - Published by Publish America

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Date: 6/13/2009 8:59:00 PM
gosh Roderick, had to come back and put this in my fav file! James
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Date: 6/13/2009 10:11:00 AM
Roderick - Excellent poetry - Congratulations on having your poetry featured this week – God Bless, MJ
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Date: 6/10/2009 3:14:00 PM
RA I can really feel this fine poem! great feature! Jim
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Date: 6/8/2009 7:17:00 PM
Congratulations on such a deserving poem being featured this week. Beautifully written! Thanks for the read... <><
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Date: 6/8/2009 2:47:00 PM
Nice scene, nice use of imagery. Congratulations on having your poem featured. Keep on writing! Wishing you continued success. Karen
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Date: 6/8/2009 1:15:00 PM
Been a while. Congratulations on your featured write. Vince
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Date: 6/8/2009 8:01:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poem being featured this week Roderick. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/7/2009 8:05:00 PM
This could be me ... I do so love the wind ... beautiful .... Love and Light Jayne
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