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Night Bird

Did you hear the night bird calling, gently luring her away? Did you feel the thunder rolling, as you watched her drift away? Did she watch the roses dying, as your world turned black and gray? Does she sleep in blissful slumber, as you keep foul ghosts at bay? Do you feel the cold rain pelting, while the sunshine lights her way? Will your spirit ne'er recover from those words she spoke that day?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 3/20/2010 10:56:00 PM
This is a beautiful poem, Danielle, truly deserving of your win the Betrayal contest. Congratulations!
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Date: 3/6/2010 9:06:00 PM
I really enjoyed this one from the contest winners! A Belated congrats to you. Andrea
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Date: 2/26/2010 7:26:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Starflixer's Betrayal contest Danielle. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/25/2010 12:48:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in the "Betrayal" Contest! Peace, Audrey
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Date: 2/25/2010 12:22:00 PM
Congrats Danielle on your winning poem in the Betrayal contest.. a wonderful write .. a well deserved win .. for a wonderful poetess.. luv.. Linda-Marie..
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Date: 2/25/2010 12:21:00 PM
Such a sad poem and so beautifully written, Danielle. Congratulations on your win! Enjoy your success. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 1/30/2009 12:57:00 PM
Words are weapons. Words are healing. We choose how we use them. Sometimes when I'm talking to a kid I'll find the words he or she heard did more damage than the abuse. Vince
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Date: 1/28/2009 7:04:00 PM
Wow, this is an amazing write, very deep and intriguing...The strong emotional toll of a relationship where one is dealing with their own demons and the other is suffering and being pushed away or neglected..But finding the courage to express yourself and the strength to leave..But not before leaving him with words that would haunt him forever...I hope this is what this is about, if not.. sorry..sometimes my imagination runs wild..beautifully written though,God Bless*Tyesha
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