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Night Beats Swinging--Ty

Ringing

  flinging

      swinging

    winging

Ringing beats , hips flinging thrill me… whole
Dance; swinging, winging as night- grooves roll !



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8/10/2019
For charles messina: Your Turn For A Tyburn
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Ravidas Avatar
August 15, 2019 at 10:42 AM
Oh, it must be perfect, I'd say, flawless tyburn. Frankly speaking, I'm not a prominent expert in tyburns, but it really looks flawless. And pleasant to ear either. Good luck in the contest)
Dietrich Avatar
August 12, 2019 at 3:36 PM
EXCELLENT, and great rhymes, sweetie. Thanks for my placement in your contest.
Wolf Avatar
August 11, 2019 at 1:44 PM
Such a well-penned pleasure of a tyburn, nette! (Soup mail, please). ~ Gershon
Cunningham Avatar
August 11, 2019 at 3:41 AM
Party time, I'm in.
Sands Avatar
August 10, 2019 at 6:26 PM
I agree, a very fun poem. Nice to read tonight. I enjoyed this. Excellent :)
Rodrigues Avatar
August 10, 2019 at 5:36 PM
Fun!
Roper Avatar
August 10, 2019 at 3:53 PM
Fantastic, Nette, good luck in the contest.... Hugs
Y. Avatar
August 10, 2019 at 3:29 PM
Hi Nette, I enjoyed this upbeat and fun write. I love to dance ( tell that to my feet lol!) I wish you the best of luck in the contest . Have a wonderful weekend:-) Alexis
Andresen Avatar
August 10, 2019 at 2:52 PM
- Have a swinging and winging Saturday night, Nette :) - Well done :) - Good luck in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Proxenos Avatar
August 10, 2019 at 2:24 PM
Sounds like a lot of fun, a trendy write my friend - best of luck. Hugs, Jenn.
Gauthier Avatar
August 10, 2019 at 2:24 PM
Fun upbeat tyburn, nette.
Pandit Avatar
August 10, 2019 at 2:20 PM
I like the swing and beat of your poem, Nette..well written, as always..all the best.
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