Night Around the World

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Stillness comes, quiet ensues at days crepuscule "time" Humans and animals rest, settling in haimish "homes" Some with droopy eyes when darkness inks the "sky" A crescent moon, it seems more and more stars fill the sky, viewed by star-gazing people in the stillness of their homes, but as the clock ticks on, they realise it's past bed-time. Owls needing to hunt for prey come out of their nesting homes Thieves also look for prey, not enjoying night's awesome sky Long ago, most slept shortly after crepuscule time. Night-time at homes round the globe: watching the sky!

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Paula Goldsmith

Date: 11/15/2023 9:45:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed your wonderful write/picture. Have a blessed day writing away...........

Sara Kendrick
Date: 11/15/2023 1:12:00 PM

Thank you, Paula for dropping by with congratulations. Sara K

Jack Horne

Date: 11/11/2023 4:08:00 AM

THanks again for writing with me, my friend - I really enjoyed learning this form

Sara Kendrick
Date: 11/11/2023 7:21:00 AM

Thank you, Jack, for dropping by and taking time to comment. Sara K

Gershon Wolf

Date: 11/4/2023 9:38:00 PM

A nice soothing poem to read tonight, at 11:40 p.m... If I could, I would -- retire at crepuscule time, that is. (Thanks for teaching me a word that rhymes with 'miniscule,' Sara!). Pleasant dreams. Zzzz

Sara Kendrick
Date: 11/5/2023 2:44:00 AM

Gershon, I hope you can use this word in both your writing and quiet conversation. I slept fairly well last night after several nights without sleeping well. Allergies have been keeping me awake with breathing problems. Thank you for dropping by and taking time to comment. Sara K

Eve Roper

Date: 11/4/2023 2:57:00 PM

Such a pleasant poem I enjoyed reading my friend. I do see once in a while an Owl around, they say its a barn owl.. That sucker is large. Then one day as I sat on the front porch during day light hours 2, must have been mates flew right over me you could tell they were owls no necks. Stay safe have a nice weekend.

Eve Roper
Date: 11/4/2023 10:21:00 PM

I try to keep my little dog close so one of those things won't come down to get him.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 11/4/2023 4:16:00 PM

Eve, Unusual for them to be seen in daylight hours, but I guess the unusual happens now and then. I have only seen one owl and only one time in my life. I was out after dark one time and one flew right over my head. In near silence he flew nearly scaring me to death. Thank you for your visit and leaving such a nice review of my work. Sara K

Sotto Poet

Date: 11/4/2023 7:33:00 AM

Sara, this is a fantastic poem. The first triplet was just flawless in every way. Your poem is just amazing!

Sara Kendrick
Date: 11/4/2023 2:22:00 PM

Thank you, Lasaad. I appreciate the kind review of my work. I appreciate the visit. Sara K

Ink Empress

Date: 11/4/2023 5:38:00 AM

Ah you are doing this form so effortlessly and seamlessly! I love the imagery and so many lines in this. I think im one of them star gazers. I just find it so comforting to watch them twinkling! Exquisite write! Loved this

Sara Kendrick
Date: 11/4/2023 2:22:00 PM

Thank you, I E. I am glad that you loved it. It is not an easy one to do for me anyway. It could be for another person though. I appreciate your visit. Sara K