Sara Kendrick Poet Haiku

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Went out one day to take the cat some fresh food and there on the cat's plate was a slug..There was only one little spot of jelly left on the plate and the slug was eating it..I guess it had a sweet tooth..Sara

Night Appearing Slug

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                                                  night appearing slug
                                           slimey creature on cat's plate..
                                                    one drop jelly left

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Cheryle Sanders January 13, 2012 at 7:29 AM beautiful imagery, a very cool haiku.

Kash Poet January 10, 2012 at 11:19 AM Very nice haiku here Sara.Enjoyed the read.

Bl Devnath January 10, 2012 at 8:31 AM Beautiful haiku, enjoyed much with jelly, my friend. bl

Carol Sunshine Brown January 10, 2012 at 6:08 AM I enjoyed reading your poetry this morning Sara. I hope to be able to read a lot more of your wonderful writing in this new year 2012. Love, Carol P.S. Yes I did fall the 28th of December.

Poet Destroyer A January 9, 2012 at 10:12 PM Dear, Sara,,, yikers... now that is the reason, i don't kiss my kitty no more...lol ~ Well whatever makes them happy... a slimmy slug yummy... thanks for the smile...p.d.

Tim B January 9, 2012 at 4:17 PM I feel for the poor cat, nasty little creatures those slugs... just add a bit of salt to taste ;). Interesting visuals here Mrs. Sara, and great poetry.

Jack Horne January 9, 2012 at 2:35 PM Eeew - I can so visualise this one! Love the descriptions

Matthew Anish January 9, 2012 at 2:07 PM I do like cats - I am notso sure about slugs.You stuck to the 5 7 5 format - which is allto the good. Haiku is a great form. Thanks for your support. Peace &Love Matthew Anish

Debra Squyres January 9, 2012 at 12:02 PM I just had to say...ewwwwwww!! They are so slimey !! Enjoyed !!