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Night and Day

Night Dark, peaceful Sleeping, lightening, loving Moon, stars, sun, light Shining, energy giving, chirping People, noise Day by:- Vrushani!!!

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Doris Culverhouse

Date: 10/27/2010 6:23:00 PM

good one but the shape is not there... should be a diamond shape. I think... if you put a period on the top right and then space bar the words over it should center them.

Vrushani Thaker
Date: 10/14/2012 7:31:00 AM

thnks for putting light on it...i will improve

Elaine George

Date: 7/26/2010 3:57:00 PM

Vey difficult form, Vrushani. You have mastered it effortlessly. Well done! Lainie

Vrushani Thaker
Date: 10/14/2012 7:33:00 AM

thnks.....but i have nt yet mastered.....hv to do lot more.....but thnks again for the boost...

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/23/2010 11:21:00 PM

This is so cute. So how old are you, little girl?

Vrushani Thaker
Date: 10/14/2012 7:34:00 AM

dat time i was 18 yrs old....now 20 yrs....n thnksssssss alot...