Night and Day

Night 
Dark, peaceful
Sleeping, lightening, loving
Moon, stars, sun, light
Shining, energy giving, chirping
People, noise
Day

                by:-
                Vrushani!!!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Culverhouse Avatar
October 27, 2010 at 6:23 PM
good one but the shape is not there... should be a diamond shape. I think... if you put a period on the top right and then space bar the words over it should center them.
Thaker Avatar
October 14, 2012 at 7:31 AM
thnks for putting light on it...i will improve
George   Avatar
July 26, 2010 at 3:57 PM
Vey difficult form, Vrushani. You have mastered it effortlessly. Well done! Lainie
Thaker Avatar
October 14, 2012 at 7:33 AM
thnks.....but i have nt yet mastered.....hv to do lot more.....but thnks again for the boost...
Dietrich Avatar
July 23, 2010 at 11:21 PM
This is so cute. So how old are you, little girl?
Thaker Avatar
October 14, 2012 at 7:34 AM
dat time i was 18 yrs old....now 20 yrs....n thnksssssss alot...
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