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Night

We are awake all night Trying to prove the better We will stay up and fight Till we end up all bitter Cause the moon up in the sky Isn't coming down to say goodbye And the sun isn't coming Coming up until the morning fire We will see if we can conquer We will think that we can war But what we do isn't a bother cause the sun is yet so far Whiskey lullabies wont work Nor will the whiskey bar I know the night has just begun The sun is yet so far

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 8/24/2015 8:49:00 AM
I like the feel of this one, you create an interesting mood.
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Anbes Rawal
Date: 8/25/2015 12:47:00 AM
thank you

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