Night

Night 

The night is so strong it pulls you in like a shark into the deep water
You can’t just dip your feet in because it cries primordial order
Places in your mind are still until darkness is your midnight caller
Enter in to it with good intentions but everything becomes closer
Look at it and it gives no answers and you slowly want to talk but you don’t bother
It touches you when you sleep and whispers nightmares and when you wake all you see is darkness the Governor
You can’t escape you silly little boy because no matter how big and strong you are the night owns your bones for proffer.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 11/30/2014 10:16:00 AM
Thanks, but a book??? by me, that's impossible
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Date: 11/29/2014 11:47:00 PM
woah, it's like the thing we all fear is surrounded in the one thing we surpass everyday.....NIGHT....its a dark, and simple poem I like it, crisp with a littlw dash or personal business
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Date: 11/30/2014 3:47:00 AM
Thanks Angel , I passed by your poetry and found a story teller in the making. I hope you have lots of fun imagining your days and nights away.
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