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Night

Sun slowly sinks closing yet another day
Warm golden rays caress the earth's orb
Moonlight peeps through drifting clouds
Stars twinkle suspended from heaven's realm
Silvery shadows slide as dark hues hide
A mist rolls in with silent ease
Wraps around and gives a squeeze
A dead calm smothers daylight to night
Moments frozen in feathery white.

3/31/13

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Date: 10/16/2017 11:19:00 PM
Divine. A definite FAVE.
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Date: 5/21/2014 4:10:00 PM
Wow! This is quite a creative and vivid description of night. Fog rolls in off the water where I live, so my favorite line is: "A mist rolls in with silent ease." Indeed, it does and it brings peace with it. Beautifully penned, Love, Carolyn
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Date: 4/24/2014 2:50:00 PM
beautiful write here, Phyll. So sorry to hear you've had pneumonia, my friend. Sending you a healing hug. We're all good here, thanks for asking. It's pretty mild and sunny here at the moment. Have a great week xx
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Date: 4/23/2014 3:01:00 AM
Hi Phyllis. I don't think we've met, but this is a lovely poem--great imagery and detail. I penned one called Night, but much different. Nicely done, my friend. Drop by sometime. Peace, Mel :)
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Date: 4/6/2014 10:02:00 AM
Phyllis, such a gifted poet. Your well recieved by your piers. Thank you for sharring.
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Date: 4/3/2014 10:03:00 AM
A very beautiful inspirational poem & stellar write which portraits a feeling of calmness my very dear friend of mine, Phyllis. So love it. Hugging this poem of yours and u. I'll take it into my fave list if you don't mind. Thank u so much for sharing and your lovely visit with nice comments on my poems. You don't know how happy I am to hear from u again. I hope you're doing well my dear friend. Biggest hugs! love lots always, Leonora
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Date: 4/3/2014 7:37:00 AM
Reads like a winner to me..Way to go with this one for the contest..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
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Date: 4/2/2014 10:51:00 PM
This is a very wondrous description of the passage from day to night! I really enjoyed reading this awesome poem this evening! You have enlightened me by the splendor of this incredible piece! What a grandiose poem, Great Work!!
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Date: 3/31/2014 12:10:00 PM
- A really lovely poem - the night, quiet and beautiful - Have a nice day, dear Phyllis. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 3/31/2014 11:57:00 AM
Phylllis Babcock, when I can read a poem of this nature, a sense of calm comes over me. ```thank you for sharring.
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Date: 3/31/2014 10:38:00 AM
Wonderfully done Phyllis! Many thanks for your great share!
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