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The nights long kiss, deadly yet not sweet, everlasting loneliness till you sleep, yet slumber never lasts, till you loose your breath away, mind churning yet not working, despair is all you hear, remembers of yesteryears never leave, never leaving no never taking a break, till the nightly fog makes you see it all, waiting wanting dawn to strike, oh heaven who can take this nights long kiss.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 8/26/2010 10:12:00 PM
Happened on this one again. It truly is one of the best of the whole contest! Luv, Andrea
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Date: 8/26/2010 10:01:00 PM
Lovely poem, Nicole, congrats on your win! LUv, Andrea
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Date: 8/23/2010 5:36:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Nicole in Deborah Guzzi's contest "Free Verse Jewels of the Crown". Love, Carol
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Date: 8/21/2010 5:47:00 PM
Congrats on the win, Nicole
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Date: 8/21/2010 7:15:00 AM
Congrats Nicole on your winning poem in Debbie's contest with this brilliant write.. enjoy..ciao..luv..
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Date: 8/19/2010 6:24:00 PM
Good day Nicole, I sure enjoyed your poem! Thing at time seem so far away and gone, and all we can do is want and wonder,..p.d.
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Date: 8/19/2010 9:54:00 AM
I am wishing you a wonderful day full of inspiration Nicole. I thank you for sharing your poetry today. It was a pleasure to read. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/18/2010 3:25:00 PM
's on line 1 night's (this is personification) line 4 put an "s" on last...lasts, (check if you want breathe? or what you have, I always do this one wrong) , waiting wanting is alliteration, last line night's....(so on the bottom of the verse you put...I used the poetic devices of personifucation & alliteration...HOPE this helps! Light & Love
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Date: 8/18/2010 11:54:00 AM
well done...TAH
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