Night

Night, appearing with frosty silence becomes engulfed in the valley of dreams, soundless, images, a continuous film of whirling silence, mixed with past and future. The night has its own tunes of hidden and restless desires.

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/13/2010 12:28:00 PM

Its own tunes found in the night. Very nice, Gert!

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 8/22/2009 8:59:00 AM

i love your night-you described it so well,excellent creation of images-charma

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/22/2009 6:28:00 AM

Very descriptive writing. Keep the pen flowing . Sara

Derrick Burton

Date: 8/21/2009 3:05:00 PM

enjoyed this short poetry.... i love nights because i tend to think clear.. enjoy your night! :)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/20/2009 5:34:00 AM

I love the line "The night has its own tunes of hidden and restless desires". Keep writing. Sara

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/20/2009 4:43:00 AM

Gert, what a fantastic piece you have here. Thank you for sharing. Love, Carol

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 8/20/2009 2:19:00 AM

There is a certain mystery that accompanies the night. It has "its own tunes." My backyard owl will confirm that. And I love the reference to "the valley of dreams." I was hoping to visit that valley tonight, but dreams don't always come when needed. Excellent write, Gert! Love, Carolyn

James Marshall Goff

Date: 8/19/2009 7:06:00 PM

Gert...lines 7 & 8 have a much-original feel to them.....if I'm still, I can feel these 2-lines....very impressive, indeed! my friend! jmg