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Andrea Dietrich invention is called Tankacrostic, in which one must write a Tanka
using Acrostic Style, so you will need to use a five-letter word.
Use the traditional syllable count of 5/7/5/7/7  TANKA rules,
using the last two lines as a kind of twist or juxtaposition to the first three lines.
Navy starry sky Inviting sea horizon Glamours seductive Tapestry vast universe Harmonious existence 7/9/2024

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Date: 8/12/2024 5:57:00 PM
Congrats on your placement in Andrea's contest, Eve, with this star-studded write. Cheers, Gershon
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Date: 7/31/2024 9:32:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your lovely/wonderful "Night" write. What A Great Picture... Have a blessed day writing away...........
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Date: 7/29/2024 3:30:00 PM
Your first two lines are a very lovely beginning to this tanka, Eve. Thanks for submitting to my contest. Congrats.
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Date: 7/24/2024 6:39:00 PM
I like the way you used night as the backdrop for unity and harmony in the cosmos. Lovely written, Eve.
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Date: 7/24/2024 6:39:00 PM
I like the way you used night as the backdrop for unity and harmony in the cosmos. Lovely written, Eve.
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Date: 7/12/2024 9:26:00 AM
what an excellent poem Eve and i love the accompanying picture:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 7/10/2024 2:03:00 AM
A great acrostic, dear Eve. Loved the last three lines. Best for a win. Hugs.
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Date: 7/9/2024 11:16:00 AM
Lovely poetic vista Eve
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