Notes About The Poem

 
Andrea Dietrich invention is called Tankacrostic, in which one must write a Tanka
using Acrostic Style, so you will need to use a five-letter word.
Use the traditional syllable count of 5/7/5/7/7  TANKA rules,
using the last two lines as a kind of twist or juxtaposition to the first three lines.

Night


Navy starry sky
Inviting sea horizon
Glamours seductive
Tapestry vast universe
Harmonious existence

7/9/2024
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Wolf Avatar
August 12, 2024 at 5:57 PM
Congrats on your placement in Andrea's contest, Eve, with this star-studded write. Cheers, Gershon
Goldsmith Avatar
July 31, 2024 at 9:32 AM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your lovely/wonderful "Night" write. What A Great Picture... Have a blessed day writing away...........
Dietrich Avatar
July 29, 2024 at 3:30 PM
Your first two lines are a very lovely beginning to this tanka, Eve. Thanks for submitting to my contest. Congrats.
Wolf Avatar
July 24, 2024 at 6:39 PM
I like the way you used night as the backdrop for unity and harmony in the cosmos. Lovely written, Eve.
Wolf Avatar
July 24, 2024 at 6:39 PM
I like the way you used night as the backdrop for unity and harmony in the cosmos. Lovely written, Eve.
Allison Avatar
July 12, 2024 at 9:26 AM
what an excellent poem Eve and i love the accompanying picture:-) hugs Jan xx
Buhagiar Avatar
July 10, 2024 at 2:03 AM
A great acrostic, dear Eve. Loved the last three lines. Best for a win. Hugs.
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