Night

night darker than dark reflecting across the lake a lost lone flicker Submitted on September 3, 2019 for contest ONE HAIKU sponsored by RICK PARISE - RANKED 1ST

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Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 5/21/2020 6:27:00 PM

Hello Lin, when it is dark it is hard to see anything. Have a nice evening my friend.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 5/22/2020 12:57:00 PM

Hello Lin, now isn't this true? LoL!

Line Gauthier
Date: 5/21/2020 8:52:00 PM

lol

Stephen Pennell

Date: 11/20/2019 6:27:00 AM

instead of just a note A moon shining back. Its glow lighting your face. alone without hope

Line Gauthier
Date: 11/20/2019 7:57:00 AM

Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Stephen.

L. J. Carber

Date: 9/16/2019 8:29:00 AM

A true haiku, evocative and subtle! Congrats on your 1st, Line

Line Gauthier
Date: 9/16/2019 8:53:00 PM

Thanks for your most appreciated visit and compliment, LJ.

Susan Ashley

Date: 9/15/2019 8:13:00 PM

Amazing imagery, Line. Congratulations on your excellent trophy win. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan

Line Gauthier
Date: 9/15/2019 11:30:00 PM

Thank you so much, Susan. Most appreciated.

Beata Agustin

Date: 9/11/2019 12:48:00 AM

Wow! Congratulations... God bless you.

Line Gauthier
Date: 9/11/2019 8:10:00 AM

Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, Beata.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 9/10/2019 7:07:00 AM

Congratulations, Line on your top win!

Line Gauthier
Date: 9/10/2019 7:28:00 AM

Thank you, Kim. Much appreciated.

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 9/10/2019 12:03:00 AM

Congratulations - beautiful poem - Blessings.

Line Gauthier
Date: 9/10/2019 7:29:00 AM

Thanks, Regina. Much appreciated.

Timothy Mcguire

Date: 9/9/2019 11:31:00 PM

Congrats on your TOP win!

Line Gauthier
Date: 9/9/2019 11:32:00 PM

Thanks, Timothy. Most appreciated.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 9/9/2019 9:13:00 PM

Wow! Excellence earns first prize. Happy for you, Line! :) gw

Line Gauthier
Date: 9/9/2019 10:32:00 PM

Thanks, Gershon. Most appreciated.

Lonna Blodgett

Date: 9/9/2019 4:33:00 PM

A well-deserved First Place!!! Lonna

Line Gauthier
Date: 9/9/2019 7:42:00 PM

Thank you so much, Lonna. Most appreciated.

Tania Kitchin

Date: 9/9/2019 3:58:00 PM

Congratulations on your trophy win, love your haiku!

Line Gauthier
Date: 9/9/2019 7:42:00 PM

Thank you, Tania. Most appreciated.

David Drowley

Date: 9/9/2019 3:49:00 PM

Line, Congratulations on your win. Excellent! David

Line Gauthier
Date: 9/9/2019 7:42:00 PM

Thanks, David. Most appreciated.

Jan Allison

Date: 9/9/2019 3:35:00 PM

you excel at the haiku form Line. many congrats on your trophy win:-) hugs Jan xx

Line Gauthier
Date: 9/9/2019 3:38:00 PM

Thank you for your kind compliment, Jan. Most appreciated.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/9/2019 3:18:00 PM

Lovely, Line. Congrats for your win.

Line Gauthier
Date: 9/9/2019 3:39:00 PM

Thanks, Andrea. Much appreciated.

Timothy Mcguire

Date: 9/3/2019 10:34:00 PM

Love it! Everything about it!

Line Gauthier
Date: 9/4/2019 9:02:00 AM

Thanks, Timothy. Much appreciated.