Nicotine

Like an ester, she clings
Silver-tongued yet soaked in
Sepia. A perfume of precarious 
Yellows and ambers in hues and
Dazes of a light and melodious 
Brown. Mustard gas pigments
Filtering onto impure hands
Vapour smog; rampant in clots
Flooding into hair, hands, the leather
Of skin; into an eternity.
Ash collecting like a snow flood
Of monochromes and greys
Fading partially to blanks and 
Dances of dirty blonde, promiscuous
Addiction; timeless Bright Young Thing
The very nature of an elixir
All our addictions catch us in the end
The curtain call rupturing on
Barbed wire hands and claws
A hunters' snare; beautiful for only a moment
Catching eternal, ethereal glassy air

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 6/25/2009 10:07:00 AM
OoOoOoO.... shivers... I love the ending line SO much. But every image in this is so precise and well... beautiful! (I know I say that too much, but it's definitely true). I don't know if any UK publishers would be interested in me (none of the US ones are =/ ) because I live in Bolivia.... but I wish you the best of luck, your work TOTALLY deserves it.
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Date: 4/24/2009 3:17:00 PM
Nicotine may be an addiction, but so is love, Nathaniel. Indeed, "our addictions catch us in the end." Very erotic tribute to the "Bright Young Thing." Love, Carolyn
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