Nice But Inept

If a salesperson’s nice but inept,
His promises rarely are kept.
Though true skills he may lack,
He says, “I’ve got your back”
So you think at his job he’s adept.

But whatever he told you was fake,
For he lied or just made a mistake.
Thus your needs won’t be met
Though you thought all was set;
New arrangements you might have to make.

When I think of it, maybe it’s best
As experience seems to suggest,
To complete any deal
With one lacking appeal
But whose help doesn’t make you feel stressed.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Krutsinger Avatar
September 28, 2022 at 10:06 AM
I always hope that the just made a mistake not lied "For he lied or just made a mistake." and I see that you are optimistic about it also.
Anaya Avatar
September 18, 2022 at 1:46 PM
Service with a smile!
Leffanta Avatar
September 18, 2022 at 11:21 AM
Living in the Big Apple, you get "the best" knocking at your door? Enjoyed your poem and insight! Aloha!
Lawless Avatar
September 18, 2022 at 6:14 AM
OH YEAH......"you are a valued customer. Please hold(and while listening to this horrible music) our next available agent will be with you...."
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