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Niagara River-Side Walk

churning and darting
changing from blonde to brunette
do calisthenics

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August 26, 2014
Form: Haiku

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Skat A

May 23, 2015 at 11:08 AM

STUNNING

Len Gasun

September 8, 2014 at 9:43 AM

A very awesome haiku with a very delightful image my dear friend Dr. Ram. I love it. It makes me want to see this place someday:))). Thanks for sharing and the rich vicarious experience! Many warm congratulations on your win! Big sweet hugs and cheers! love lots, Leonora

Olusegun Arowolo

September 7, 2014 at 11:45 PM

Wonderful and Intriguing piece..Great write,Dr.Ram..Congrats on your well deserved win...Thanks for visiting my page...

Richard Ferry

September 7, 2014 at 10:43 AM

Congrats,,,to you as well

Anne-Lise Andresen

September 7, 2014 at 4:35 AM

- Dr. Ram, congratulations on your winning poem in the contest: "River Walk" - Well done, I like it :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Andrea Dietrich

September 6, 2014 at 10:58 PM

quite an interesting one. A metaphor I believe!! Congrats.

Brenda Meier-Hans

September 6, 2014 at 10:42 AM

I have been to the falls often and love the way you have portrayed them in this lovely Haiku. Congratulations Dr. Mehta.

Jan Allison

September 6, 2014 at 7:07 AM

Dropping back with my congratulations Dr Mehta:-) Hugs Jan xxx

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

September 5, 2014 at 11:41 PM

Congrats on ur brilliant winning haiku Dr Ram!

Poet Destroyer A

September 5, 2014 at 11:24 PM

Dr Ram:). Congratulations, on an awesome River Walk, Win:):):) Enjoy the smiles, and my blog, You're a "River Legend" if you'd like or have time. Always & Forever ~LINDA~

James Fraser

August 31, 2014 at 9:49 AM

Quirky Haiku Dr. Ram, nice one :)

Shadow Hamilton

August 27, 2014 at 6:12 PM

good humour Ram gl in contest hugs

Debbie Guzzi

August 26, 2014 at 5:18 PM

I have to see Niagara, I haven't? Light & Love

Brenda Meier-Hans

August 26, 2014 at 3:01 PM

Very clever. Nice Haiku!

Maurice Yvonne

August 26, 2014 at 1:47 PM

greart entry. good luck in the contest my friend.

Earl Schumacker

August 26, 2014 at 11:53 AM

Good afternoon Dr. Mehta, This is a very clever haiku. Very imaginative with a lot of cool fun images. There is a lot going on in this. The hair change analogy is perfect. Great job. Earl