Niagara Falls of Our Lives

I’m on the rapids…we Are riding on the waves The direction is to go ashore alive To surpass the tide-high and low Along the journey There could be drowning There could be exhaustion There could be resuscitation Calm down, CONCENTRATE, and swim! Not just for sheer love, but for life as well Both of us must be strong Tremendous faith must glue us on Despite the rocks and the falls Everything must be weathered And the impact definitely for us!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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May 9, 2012 at 12:41 PM
I am trying to catch up some on my thank you's to all the wonderful poets who have left kind comments on my writings. I thank you so much for your words of kindness Dalila. I enjoyed reading your poetry today and hope you are having a wonderful day. Love, Carol
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March 14, 2012 at 12:15 AM
Niagra Falls as a metaphor for "riding it out" in life. How unique. I really enjoyed this creative work of yours.
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