Nextlahualli

On days like this 
I wish I was an Aztec.
Give me Nextlahualli
As a noble death.
I’d gladly part with 
My possessions, and
Give my body in sacrifice
To the benefit of the gods.
Yes, it’s the Flower War,
A good death.
You don’t believe in that?
You don’t revere the gods?
Blasphemy!
Better to cut your tongue
In half in atonement than
Say that aloud.  
I lie in a drugged stupor
As they ready the flint knife
Which my priest will use
To cut out my heart.
I feel greatly honored 
A Flower War death is
Much more noble than 
Dying in battle.
From forever land I watch
My discarded body get 
Flung down the temple’s steps.
There is satisfaction in knowing
I have saved my community,
And my viscera will feed 
The animals in the zoo.
Religion trumps spirituality
Every time!
I wish I was an Aztec.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Neumann Avatar
March 10, 2018 at 5:56 AM
This is very powerful and I like it. Controversial, but therefore mind blowing...
Krutsinger Avatar
March 12, 2018 at 7:15 AM
If it's not controversial, I don't usually enjoy it this much. Thank you, Kai.
Gauthier Avatar
March 9, 2018 at 7:08 PM
A most interesting poem, Caren. Stay with us longer though... A really lovely write.
Krutsinger Avatar
March 10, 2018 at 12:58 AM
Thank you, Line. I consider you one of my bestest online friends ever!
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