Next of Kin

where am (i can't find me) oh my 
(yo tambien) it's essential, follow 
the leader many places- we've never 
been, i'm deeply moved- the next of kin: 
broke free from the tree that roots with
in even when (i see i lose) i win i know 
better yet- i keep forgetting my sweater- 
in the rabid air, frostbitten, chewing bites 
gnawing holes thru the night: 
'all the better to breathe thru'- 
out the solar system of a downward spiral. 
my breath is bile, i expect a single file- 
following a (leader lost) can't keep up the 
cost is a cause, thrifty cheap laws stretching- 
still missing the point
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Davis Avatar
September 5, 2010 at 4:22 PM
interesting style.
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September 2, 2010 at 2:09 PM
deep write, enjoyed this one..P.D.
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