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Next Door Leads To the Cruelty

An approach to see a heaven.. World is full of blathers Anger and Aggravation found in everyone Another door is opened to lead towards cruelty This is a wonder world; open your eyes Immensity of jealousy growing, to infinitude a heaven Open your eyes wide; you are leading towards cruelty Throbbed the cosmos; shine like a star Spark your kindness; shine like a star Being a blithe, I'm another example! Just shine like a star!

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Abdiel Rios

Date: 12/1/2015 11:51:00 AM

Its true that next door will lead to cruelty and the other heaven

Asma Memon
Date: 12/10/2015 12:41:00 PM

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Ayesha Karim

Date: 4/9/2015 10:39:00 PM

Or like a diamond. Why did you give the poem this title? I like the poem though!

Asma Memon
Date: 4/10/2015 3:59:00 PM

Diamond is rare and perception has differentiate diamond as an expensive jewel. So, why not to keep it simple star! :) I gave this title because each door whether it's for studies, job, friendship, etc. you will find negativity everywhere, although you can't eliminate by having a magic wand. How'bt changing yourself and just shine like a star.

Bikram Singh

Date: 4/9/2015 7:41:00 AM

great Asma ..deep observation

Asma Memon
Date: 4/10/2015 3:58:00 PM

Thanks Bikram Singh

Ovidiu Bocsa

Date: 4/6/2015 6:04:00 AM

The hymn of peace and serenity doubled by living imagery open many secret chambers for meditation on ethics .Congrat

Asma Memon
Date: 4/6/2015 11:37:00 AM

Thanks Ovidiu.

Karl Marszalowicz

Date: 4/6/2015 4:34:00 AM

are you sure you want this title? the poem is fine for the positive end thought but "Next Door" implies enough let the reader assume what they want. Still fine!

Asma Memon
Date: 4/6/2015 5:12:00 AM

Thanks for your suggestion. In my opnion, next door also means u have no idea what is behind in it. Nowadays next door every next door is leading towards cruetly.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/4/2015 7:12:00 PM

Asma, Dropped by to say hi and congratulate you on having your poem selected by Soup's Administration. This is a wonderful poem to have featured on the homepage. ~Always & Forever~ LINDA

Asma Memon
Date: 4/6/2015 5:13:00 AM

Thanks linda for your appreciation. Sometimes little motivation, encourage you to enhance more.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/2/2015 6:55:00 PM

Asma, Thank you for the sweet reply to my comment. Love LINDA

Stellamoses Hart

Date: 4/1/2015 8:05:00 AM

This is a great piece. Well done

Asma Memon
Date: 4/1/2015 8:44:00 AM

I remember you participate on poetry competition. Feel free to visit my web: www.xmmamemon.com

Asma Memon
Date: 4/1/2015 8:43:00 AM

Thanks Stellamoses.

Iris E. S-Lewis

Date: 3/31/2015 4:40:00 PM

"Just shine like a star" I love this line. What kind reminder.

Asma Memon
Date: 3/31/2015 4:44:00 PM

Thanks Iris.

Suburban Lovechild

Date: 3/31/2015 4:09:00 PM

Is it always that simple? No, but love being reminded of it, repeatedly like you have, because, yes, cruelty (self or external) is a moment away (and too often accepted as the norm). Thx for bring our shining star, nice write.

Asma Memon
Date: 3/31/2015 4:44:00 PM

Sure, i will take a look on your poems too. It's worth trying. it is necessary to take part in such events because it helps you to enhance your capability. Sometimes win or loose doesn't matter - it's about taking one step further and realizing you are someone who no-one else can be.

Suburban Lovechild
Date: 3/31/2015 4:19:00 PM

Thx Asma, call me Subby. I took a peek at your Web and fb pages, good stuff. As for competitions, haven't done it yet (here or otherwise) but soon. Take a peek at my poems too, I think you'll enjoy.

Asma Memon
Date: 3/31/2015 4:15:00 PM

It is only simple when you are ready to get change. Be the change. It is necessary to remind yourself you have to shine like a star. Thanks Suburban.

Asma Memon
Date: 3/31/2015 4:15:00 PM

https://www.facebook.com/events/814083398672155/ You should participate in poetry competition too.

Kamran Rashid

Date: 3/31/2015 12:22:00 PM

JUST SHINE..lovely write ASMA and i like the thought..just copying it

Asma Memon
Date: 3/31/2015 12:24:00 PM

Thanks. You can visit my web: www.xmmamemon.com

Robert Lindley

Date: 3/28/2015 3:38:00 PM

Welcome to the Soup. I agree, shine like a star but do so with integrity, courage and honor.. A7 and bravooooo!!!!

Asma Memon
Date: 3/28/2015 3:39:00 PM

Thanks for your appreciation. :)

Skat A

Date: 3/26/2015 1:12:00 PM

ASMA, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT"

Asma Memon
Date: 3/26/2015 1:18:00 PM

Hi Skat, I'm Asma Memon - I have been writing since i was 14 and now i have completed my bachelors. I have start blogging too and currently working on my book and e-book (aphorism). Feel free to visit my web: www.xmmamemon.com If you use facebook thn visit this link too. https://www.facebook.com/events/814083398672155/ I have started this poetry competition for everyone to encourage them to enhance thr writing skills. Everyone need a particular platform to make thr own distinctive identity. So, i am trying to play a positive role for others to encourage them and bring them back to life and make them feel yes a writer have similar worth like other fields have. Kind regards,

Thomas Carney

Date: 3/23/2015 6:57:00 AM

It makes one think> should we be focusing more on the after life or the world. Good effort. Thomas

Thomas Carney
Date: 3/25/2015 2:58:00 PM

Have no Facebook account and don't want one. However, I did write down your web site and plan on visiting. Best. Thomas

Asma Memon
Date: 3/23/2015 2:39:00 PM

https://www.facebook.com/events/814083398672155/ if you are interest. Take part in this poetry competition

Asma Memon
Date: 3/23/2015 6:59:00 AM

How about focusing on this world first. If you get succeed here surely you will in after-life. Thanks your for comment Kind regards, Asma P.s feel free to visit my web : www.xmmamemon.com

Roger Horsch

Date: 3/23/2015 6:03:00 AM

Hello Asma, It is nice to see you on the poetry soup. I can not wait to see more of your writings......Hugs.....Roger

Asma Memon
Date: 3/23/2015 2:40:00 PM

https://www.facebook.com/events/814083398672155/ if you are interest. Take part in this poetry competition

Asma Memon
Date: 3/23/2015 6:09:00 AM

I also work on Aphorism, blogs and creative writing.

Asma Memon
Date: 3/23/2015 6:08:00 AM

Thanks. You can also visit my website for more writing. www.xmmamemon.com

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/22/2015 2:04:00 PM

Asma, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy 2015, with New Poet Friends @-> LINDA <-@

Asma Memon
Date: 3/22/2015 3:24:00 PM

InshaAllah. I will look forward to spread my positive words through my writing.

Kamran Rashid

Date: 3/22/2015 9:53:00 AM

wishing u great..was good reading it..alll i can say is the same old thing that these doors are olz there ...we have to get into our own choices..the sufferings ,,the pain,,the fear and frost they have taken whole part of this garden it is all today because of us we just wish and pray..resist and live,#looking forward

Asma Memon
Date: 3/22/2015 10:20:00 AM

Thanks. Nowadays every door leads to cruelty, humanity is fading. Now it's all about sparkle your inner strength. P.s, www.xmmamemon.com