Next Day Gone

One day here, next day gone An unexplainable part of life's marathon That day is final Seems so primal Creatures of earth as we pass the baton
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Tor Avatar
July 19, 2020 at 8:37 PM
Wow Jack this hits home with the passing of my booboo. Your so right on this one. Another insightful piece my friend. Thank you for writing. The baton will be passed for the next little one that will bring joy to our lives. Thanks again Jack for this piece, hope you are well my friend...
Ellison Avatar
July 22, 2020 at 7:24 AM
I feel so sad for you Michael! Don't know how I'll get through when my Annie is gone! A big piece of my heart will go with her! You have become a big part of my day here on the Soup dear Michael xx
Cunningham Avatar
July 19, 2020 at 4:11 PM
First the dinosaurs, are we next?
Ellison Avatar
July 19, 2020 at 4:28 PM
Quite possibly but we have days like this when you visit your daughter! OOOEEEE!
De Beaulieu Avatar
July 19, 2020 at 8:25 AM
Hello happy jack, yes one day here then one day gone. Enjoy your day my friend. love, Darlene xxxx-ooo.
De Beaulieu Avatar
July 22, 2020 at 3:18 PM
Hello happy jack, yes we never know. Enjoy your evening my friend. xxxx-oooo.
Ellison Avatar
July 19, 2020 at 8:45 AM
We never know do we!!! Have a great Sunday Miss Darlene!!! XOX
Pigeon Tart Avatar
July 19, 2020 at 7:23 AM
Summed up succinctly. Not ready for that baton just yet... x!
Ellison Avatar
July 19, 2020 at 7:51 AM
Nope! The way I feel today, I've got at least another ten years! LOL No, I mean really... love HJ! XOX
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace