Newly Married

This heart so sweet was under a rent purchase of its lands to become a village contract execution, more transparent oaths creating the billboards of marriage strong guided words from elders and parents willingness to learn is the only adage for two halves to be whole and coherent as years pass by with very light carriage swimming in a blue pool or dirty pond challenges present but each with its diaper no cover ups to threats, rightly respond more than one Army in a home is proper experience is added in each second decades of this bliss, beats love on paper.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Chuan Seng Avatar
May 4, 2016 at 8:23 AM
A well crafted piece of sonnet... You're a natural with the words chosen..Enjoyed reading the rhymes!
Makama Avatar
May 9, 2016 at 11:19 AM
Thank you very much Keng Chuan Seng
Bhurani Avatar
March 19, 2016 at 1:36 AM
A lovely sonnet....knack of a grt poet.....
Makama Avatar
April 20, 2016 at 1:24 PM
Thank you so much Rizwana Bhurani
Salehi Avatar
March 17, 2016 at 6:57 PM
Funom,you are the king of sonnet,very nice
Makama Avatar
April 20, 2016 at 1:24 PM
Thank you so much Pashang Salehi
Bocsa Avatar
March 2, 2016 at 9:43 AM
Beautiful sonnet reminding me about a definition of marriage: two masters of slaves and two slaves, thus sum two.
Makama Avatar
March 5, 2016 at 11:04 AM
Thank you very much Ovidiu
Canerdy Avatar
March 2, 2016 at 9:33 AM
Good job on this realistic comment on marriage, Funom. Janice
Makama Avatar
March 5, 2016 at 11:03 AM
Thank you very much Janice
Kendrick Avatar
March 2, 2016 at 9:13 AM
Enjoyed reading your work today..Marriage can be good or bad just what the couple decide to make it..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
Makama Avatar
March 5, 2016 at 11:03 AM
Thank you very much Sara
Callus Avatar
March 2, 2016 at 8:33 AM
Your musings on marriage hold righteous and upright ideals, Funom. Love can be properly shared when both, united as one, are capable of facing all challenges. // paul
Makama Avatar
March 5, 2016 at 11:02 AM
Thank you very much Paul
Andresen Avatar
March 2, 2016 at 8:21 AM
- Marriage is two about everything, sharing bankbook and bills, sugar and salt :) - First and foremost, marriage one to be with day and night and a friend to cry and laugh together with :) - A great sonnet, Funom - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Makama Avatar
March 5, 2016 at 11:01 AM
Thank you very much Anne Lise
White Avatar
March 2, 2016 at 8:20 AM
This is absolutely superb. Describes new married life to a T. Beautiful and unselfish Funom
Makama Avatar
March 5, 2016 at 11:01 AM
Thank you so much Kelli
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