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This heart so sweet was under a rent purchase of its lands to become a village contract execution, more transparent oaths creating the billboards of marriage strong guided words from elders and parents willingness to learn is the only adage for two halves to be whole and coherent as years pass by with very light carriage swimming in a blue pool or dirty pond challenges present but each with its diaper no cover ups to threats, rightly respond more than one Army in a home is proper experience is added in each second decades of this bliss, beats love on paper.

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Date: 5/4/2016 8:23:00 AM
A well crafted piece of sonnet... You're a natural with the words chosen..Enjoyed reading the rhymes!
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Funom Makama
Date: 5/9/2016 11:19:00 AM
Thank you very much Keng Chuan Seng
Date: 3/19/2016 1:36:00 AM
A lovely sonnet....knack of a grt poet.....
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Funom Makama
Date: 4/20/2016 1:24:00 PM
Thank you so much Rizwana Bhurani
Date: 3/17/2016 6:57:00 PM
Funom,you are the king of sonnet,very nice
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Funom Makama
Date: 4/20/2016 1:24:00 PM
Thank you so much Pashang Salehi
Date: 3/2/2016 9:43:00 AM
Beautiful sonnet reminding me about a definition of marriage: two masters of slaves and two slaves, thus sum two.
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Funom Makama
Date: 3/5/2016 11:04:00 AM
Thank you very much Ovidiu
Date: 3/2/2016 9:33:00 AM
Good job on this realistic comment on marriage, Funom. Janice
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Funom Makama
Date: 3/5/2016 11:03:00 AM
Thank you very much Janice
Date: 3/2/2016 9:13:00 AM
Enjoyed reading your work today..Marriage can be good or bad just what the couple decide to make it..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
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Funom Makama
Date: 3/5/2016 11:03:00 AM
Thank you very much Sara
Date: 3/2/2016 8:33:00 AM
Your musings on marriage hold righteous and upright ideals, Funom. Love can be properly shared when both, united as one, are capable of facing all challenges. // paul
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Funom Makama
Date: 3/5/2016 11:02:00 AM
Thank you very much Paul
Date: 3/2/2016 8:21:00 AM
- Marriage is two about everything, sharing bankbook and bills, sugar and salt :) - First and foremost, marriage one to be with day and night and a friend to cry and laugh together with :) - A great sonnet, Funom - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Funom Makama
Date: 3/5/2016 11:01:00 AM
Thank you very much Anne Lise
Date: 3/2/2016 8:20:00 AM
This is absolutely superb. Describes new married life to a T. Beautiful and unselfish Funom
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Funom Makama
Date: 3/5/2016 11:01:00 AM
Thank you so much Kelli

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