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New Year's Resolutions

broken promises, resurfacing as new dreams ~ a new year's nightmare Monoku 2: New Year Sponsor: Silent One 17 syllables (5-7-5)

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Line Gauthier

Date: 1/2/2018 11:11:00 AM

Congrats on your winning monoku, Vijay.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/2/2018 3:36:00 PM

Thank you Line.

Paul Callus

Date: 12/31/2017 3:53:00 PM

Back with congratulation Vijay! I'm still trying to visit all the winning entries in this contest. ~ May yours be a happy and fruitful New Year! // paul

Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/1/2018 6:57:00 AM

Thank you Paul. Happy New Year!

Roy Pett

Date: 12/31/2017 7:04:00 AM

Congratulations on your well deserved win Vijay, wishing you and yours a very happy new year, :)) Thanks for all your support in 2017.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/1/2018 6:56:00 AM

Thank you Roy. Happy New Year!

Probir Gupta

Date: 12/30/2017 11:03:00 PM

Great monoku ... Congratulations on your fine win, Vijay ...

Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/1/2018 6:56:00 AM

Thank you Probir.

Susan Ashley

Date: 12/29/2017 8:47:00 PM

Congratulations Vijay on your wonderful win. Happy New Year! ~Susan

Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/30/2017 11:43:00 AM

Thank you Susan.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/29/2017 4:48:00 PM

Congrats for your win, and may you have a blessed new year, VIjay

Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/30/2017 11:43:00 AM

Thank you Andrea.

Sandra Haight

Date: 12/29/2017 3:29:00 PM

An outstanding Monoku, Vijay! Congratulations on your placement! Sandra

Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/29/2017 3:48:00 PM

Thank you Sandra.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/29/2017 1:12:00 PM

- Congratulations, Vijay :) - Happy New Year To You - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/29/2017 3:48:00 PM

Thank you Anne-Lise.

Silent One

Date: 12/29/2017 6:59:00 AM

Great one liner, Congratulations on your placement in the new year contest and happy new year Vijay..

Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/29/2017 8:21:00 AM

Thank you Silent One--happy new year to you!

James Swartz

Date: 12/28/2017 8:35:00 PM

Your words are so precise Vijay. This is why i quit making resolutions.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/28/2017 9:07:00 PM

Thank you James.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/28/2017 7:34:00 PM

well said, Vijay. I sure hope this prediction does not come true!!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/28/2017 7:48:00 PM

I agree with your sentiments..thank you Andrea.

Heidi Sands

Date: 12/28/2017 7:13:00 PM

That's true and you have put it into a great Monoku Vijay! :)

Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/28/2017 7:47:00 PM

Thank you Heidi.

Alexis Y.

Date: 12/28/2017 3:39:00 PM

Hi Vijay, Many can relate to this well written one- liner. I certainly can.I wish you the best of luck in the contest.Happy New Year :-).Alexis

Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/28/2017 4:10:00 PM

Thank you Alexis--yes..it is hard to keep the resolutions.

Paul Callus

Date: 12/28/2017 3:20:00 PM

This is a monoku with a lesson attached to it, Vijay...best to avoid new resolutions...they will come back to haunt us:) Regards // paul

Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/28/2017 4:09:00 PM

Thank you Paul..you are right about the lesson.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/28/2017 12:34:00 PM

- Do not make promises ... take the day as it comes - Great written, Vijay :) - Good luck in the contest - Happy New Year! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/28/2017 1:32:00 PM

Happy New Year to Anne-Lise..many thanks.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 12/28/2017 11:27:00 AM

Oh indeed, a sad one!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/28/2017 1:28:00 PM

Thanks Kim.

Susan Ashley

Date: 12/27/2017 10:19:00 PM

An awesome monoku Vijay. Recycling broken promises doesn't bode well for the new year. An excellent write and best wishes in the contest.. ~Susan

Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/28/2017 7:28:00 AM

Thank you Susan..enjoyed reading your comments.

Janice Canerdy

Date: 12/27/2017 7:56:00 PM

Yes, those unrealistic resolutions can be a nightmare. This is powerful--well-done, Vijay! Janice

Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/28/2017 7:27:00 AM

Very true..thank you Janice.

CayCay Jennings

Date: 12/27/2017 6:03:00 PM

Well done! These challenges are also fun, aren't they? This is impressive and laid out just right. All the best ... CayCay

Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/28/2017 7:26:00 AM

Thank you CayCay.