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New Year's Resolutions

broken promises, resurfacing as new dreams ~ a new year's nightmare



Monoku 2: New Year
Sponsor: Silent One
17 syllables (5-7-5)

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Line Gauthier

January 2, 2018 at 11:11 AM

Congrats on your winning monoku, Vijay.

Vijay Pandit

January 2, 2018 at 3:36 PM

Thank you Line.

Paul Callus

December 31, 2017 at 3:53 PM

Back with congratulation Vijay! I'm still trying to visit all the winning entries in this contest. ~ May yours be a happy and fruitful New Year! // paul

Vijay Pandit

January 1, 2018 at 6:57 AM

Thank you Paul. Happy New Year!

Roy Pett

December 31, 2017 at 7:04 AM

Congratulations on your well deserved win Vijay, wishing you and yours a very happy new year, :)) Thanks for all your support in 2017.

Vijay Pandit

January 1, 2018 at 6:56 AM

Thank you Roy. Happy New Year!

Probir Gupta

December 30, 2017 at 11:03 PM

Great monoku ... Congratulations on your fine win, Vijay ...

Vijay Pandit

January 1, 2018 at 6:56 AM

Thank you Probir.

Susan Ashley

December 29, 2017 at 8:47 PM

Congratulations Vijay on your wonderful win. Happy New Year! ~Susan

Vijay Pandit

December 30, 2017 at 11:43 AM

Thank you Susan.

Andrea Dietrich

December 29, 2017 at 4:48 PM

Congrats for your win, and may you have a blessed new year, VIjay

Vijay Pandit

December 30, 2017 at 11:43 AM

Thank you Andrea.

Sandra Haight

December 29, 2017 at 3:29 PM

An outstanding Monoku, Vijay! Congratulations on your placement! Sandra

Vijay Pandit

December 29, 2017 at 3:48 PM

Thank you Sandra.

Anne-Lise Andresen

December 29, 2017 at 1:12 PM

- Congratulations, Vijay :) - Happy New Year To You - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Vijay Pandit

December 29, 2017 at 3:48 PM

Thank you Anne-Lise.

Silent One

December 29, 2017 at 6:59 AM

Great one liner, Congratulations on your placement in the new year contest and happy new year Vijay..

Vijay Pandit

December 29, 2017 at 8:21 AM

Thank you Silent One--happy new year to you!

James Swartz

December 28, 2017 at 8:35 PM

Your words are so precise Vijay. This is why i quit making resolutions.

Vijay Pandit

December 28, 2017 at 9:07 PM

Thank you James.

Andrea Dietrich

December 28, 2017 at 7:34 PM

well said, Vijay. I sure hope this prediction does not come true!!

Vijay Pandit

December 28, 2017 at 7:48 PM

I agree with your sentiments..thank you Andrea.

Heidi Sands

December 28, 2017 at 7:13 PM

That's true and you have put it into a great Monoku Vijay! :)

Vijay Pandit

December 28, 2017 at 7:47 PM

Thank you Heidi.

Alexis Y.

December 28, 2017 at 3:39 PM

Hi Vijay, Many can relate to this well written one- liner. I certainly can.I wish you the best of luck in the contest.Happy New Year :-).Alexis

Vijay Pandit

December 28, 2017 at 4:10 PM

Thank you Alexis--yes..it is hard to keep the resolutions.

Paul Callus

December 28, 2017 at 3:20 PM

This is a monoku with a lesson attached to it, Vijay...best to avoid new resolutions...they will come back to haunt us:) Regards // paul

Vijay Pandit

December 28, 2017 at 4:09 PM

Thank you Paul..you are right about the lesson.

Anne-Lise Andresen

December 28, 2017 at 12:34 PM

- Do not make promises ... take the day as it comes - Great written, Vijay :) - Good luck in the contest - Happy New Year! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Vijay Pandit

December 28, 2017 at 1:32 PM

Happy New Year to Anne-Lise..many thanks.

Kim Rodrigues

December 28, 2017 at 11:27 AM

Oh indeed, a sad one!

Vijay Pandit

December 28, 2017 at 1:28 PM

Thanks Kim.

Susan Ashley

December 27, 2017 at 10:19 PM

An awesome monoku Vijay. Recycling broken promises doesn't bode well for the new year. An excellent write and best wishes in the contest.. ~Susan

Vijay Pandit

December 28, 2017 at 7:28 AM

Thank you Susan..enjoyed reading your comments.

Janice Canerdy

December 27, 2017 at 7:56 PM

Yes, those unrealistic resolutions can be a nightmare. This is powerful--well-done, Vijay! Janice

Vijay Pandit

December 28, 2017 at 7:27 AM

Very true..thank you Janice.

CayCay Godwin

December 27, 2017 at 6:03 PM

Well done! These challenges are also fun, aren't they? This is impressive and laid out just right. All the best ... CayCay

Vijay Pandit

December 28, 2017 at 7:26 AM

Thank you CayCay.

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