New Year's Midas Touch

New Year's Midas Touch

You have the Midas touch in 2016!
My antennas stood up, my neck did preen
Like I had swallowed centre shock
My two lamps glistened and head did rock
I sucked in a deep breath allowing my thoughts to brew
Asked my palmist friend if it was really true
She smiled and told me to wait till the year ends
My stars are going through favourable bends
But I had started sensing it sieve
A fortnight before new year's eve
The obstacles in personal life had kept me in a sway
Were miraculously being blown away
Expedited with unusual unexpected ease
My tensed nerves were tranquilly on a cease
Or was it meditation that had wizened me?
Eureka! Wherever life would lead me! 

Destiny and fate dances with the wind
It lifted dad in its arms to far away land
Tears rolled down streams of migration
Into my heart for permanent felicitation
His love for flora was observed with ardour
His nursery of winter flowers blooms in my arbour
Comfort zones of dependency snipped away
Emotional independence opened a new doorway
Past is frosty, new year's beginning is interesting
Eureka! The Midas Touch on my palms say something!


January 2, 2016
Contest: Any Poem You've Been Writing On New Year's
Sponsor: Skat A

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Date: 1/26/2016 9:29:00 PM
BALVEEN, Congrats on your Best love poem #3 win. Hugs -- LINDA --
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 1/26/2016 10:22:00 PM
Thanks Linda!
Date: 1/14/2016 4:52:00 AM
Congrats on awesome win with this wonderful write Balveen.
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 1/15/2016 9:24:00 AM
That's a sweet compliment, Upma! Thanks!
Date: 1/13/2016 11:58:00 AM
Balveen, Congratulations on your awesome win. Love **SKAT
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 1/15/2016 9:25:00 AM
Thanks Skat! Glad you are still here. Love....
Date: 1/2/2016 7:20:00 PM
Balveen, I agree with Jack. Very creative writing. I love the symbolism of the Midas Touch on your palms.
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 1/3/2016 1:00:00 PM
Thanks for your appreciation, Andrea! Your visits are always a pleasure!
Date: 1/2/2016 3:11:00 PM
love this wonderfully creative write
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 1/3/2016 1:01:00 PM
Jack, thanks for your fisit and appreciation!
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