Premiere Contest WinnerNew Year Sunrise

Post-drought the winter dawning creeps
across my coarse and brindled lawn,
a molten ocean snail-like seeps
and spreads its early morning yawn.

A lambent thread it first appeared
to rise and fall with rooftops' pitch.
Across the frost it persevered,
this aura of an angel which

has fixed me to this gilded spot
with silent prayers in misted breath, 
the fuchsia-ed clouds the sky's begot
above a saffron-laureled wreath.

The first of January wakes
effulgent as the new year breaks.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Barden Avatar
January 20, 2018 at 2:42 AM
Best wishes and congratulations on your well-earned win, Dale - blessings, my friend! :-)
Smith Avatar
January 17, 2018 at 11:15 AM
Wonderful work Dale, congratulations, most deserved...
Cozart Avatar
January 17, 2018 at 11:34 AM
Thanks so much, Charlie, good to hear from you!
Scars Avatar
January 16, 2018 at 7:05 AM
beautiful poem Dale congrats! :) -luloo
Cozart Avatar
January 16, 2018 at 8:21 AM
Thanks, Laura!
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January 15, 2018 at 6:35 PM
Congrats on your first place win, Dale.
Cozart Avatar
January 15, 2018 at 7:23 PM
Thanks, Line!
Pandit Avatar
January 15, 2018 at 3:35 PM
You shine with this win..well deserved...congrats!!
Cozart Avatar
January 15, 2018 at 3:53 PM
Thanks for reading, Vijay!
Roper Avatar
January 15, 2018 at 11:22 AM
Beautiful, Dale, congratulations on an awesome win.. Hugs
Roper Avatar
January 15, 2018 at 11:22 AM
Beautiful, Dale, congratulations on an awesome win.. Hugs
Cozart Avatar
January 15, 2018 at 11:27 AM
Thanks, Eve!
Rodrigues Avatar
January 15, 2018 at 10:32 AM
Quite a beauty! Congrats on your top premiere placement, Dale!
Cozart Avatar
January 15, 2018 at 10:41 AM
Thanks so much, Kim! I'm really excited!
Allison Avatar
January 15, 2018 at 10:25 AM
I KNEW it would be a winner for you Dale!!!!! Many congrats on your trophy win i am delighted for you:-) hugs jan xx
Cozart Avatar
January 15, 2018 at 10:41 AM
Thanks, Jan!!
Rv Avatar
January 15, 2018 at 10:20 AM
Oh what imagery.. such beautiful words and description; congrats on your great win! I have read this thrice and love your sonnet :))
Cozart Avatar
January 15, 2018 at 10:25 AM
Thanks so much, Sneha!
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December 25, 2017 at 5:57 PM
Fantastic imagery, you make the morning come to life. Love it! Merry Christmas, Dale.
Cozart Avatar
December 25, 2017 at 6:03 PM
Thanks, Agnes. Merry Christmas to you, too!
Marcum Wong Avatar
December 25, 2017 at 3:49 PM
A spectacular sonnet indeed Dale! Your imagery is breathtaking. I adore nature poems and this was such a joy to read this Christmas day! Merry Christmas to you and your family. xxoo ; )
Cozart Avatar
December 25, 2017 at 5:02 PM
Thanks so much, Connie. Merry Christmas to you, too.
Pandit Avatar
December 25, 2017 at 8:55 AM
A delightful read--a beautiful sonnet--you are a master of this form!
Cozart Avatar
December 25, 2017 at 9:54 AM
Thanks so much, Vijay!
Ashley Avatar
December 24, 2017 at 10:08 PM
A 'spectacular' and beautiful sonnet Dale that's abundant with delectable imagery that delights and enchants... so enjoyable! Warmest wishes.. Susan
Ashley Avatar
December 25, 2017 at 9:30 AM
Merry Christmas to you Dale and those you love..
Cozart Avatar
December 25, 2017 at 8:27 AM
Thanks, Susan. Merry Christmas!
Allison Avatar
December 24, 2017 at 6:34 PM
I knew your poem would be bursting with colourful imagery Dale and i was not disappointed!!! A joy to read this Christmas Day:-) hugs Jan xx
Cozart Avatar
December 24, 2017 at 6:45 PM
Thanks so much, Jan! I think I started over about ten times!
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