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One leaving year, is sketching to a close. There will arise a fresh, one beginning.   Bid farewell to anything that is morose. Reach along the striking sides on living. Those Promises become a drilling in vanity. Beings direct bearings emerge to befall false. Pledges are subtly conveyed, then, futility. It's doubtful to pursue your dream source. let's plead for vigour and evident delight. And for concord in the coming year too. And as the clocks resound at midnight. I hope those ultimate dreams come true. Best tip I've won: live all your daydream. Utterly one frail life is ostensibly we redeem. It's trivial to squander strength on expecting. You will be prodded into a treasure wing. The finest is withal to reach for everyone.  Expecting bliss in the new year as well. And at zero hours, chorus yodels loud then.  I hope for you, rapture and hefty outrival.
Written: November 19, 2021

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Date: 11/20/2021 3:54:00 PM
A hopeful wish, I have my fingers crossed. Blessings, Paulette
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Date: 11/20/2021 5:04:00 AM
Lovely write, Lassad. We have all experienced broken pledges and unsated dreams. May yours come true.
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Date: 11/20/2021 2:39:00 AM
I so much wish the dreams of the new year to come true, my friend, Lasaad! Beautifully written!
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Date: 11/19/2021 11:13:00 PM
Lovely poem though in my old pessimistic age I don't think there will be any improvement.
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