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New Year Diet

At Christmas as always I ate
So much that I put on some weight
New year I must try
To stay off the pie
And next year, well I just can't wait.

Copyright © Lola Barron | Year Posted 2012

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January 18, 2013 at 7:32 PM

Lola,,,a belated congrats on a perfectomundo limerick...not a single thing could be improved upon! Limerick writing is def your strength!! Let's do this again real soon! ;) gwendolen

January 19, 2013 at 8:15 AM

Thanks very much. Lola.

January 18, 2013 at 3:16 PM

Perfect meter..the only one with it so far a BIG gold star to you! Congrad's on your win! Light & Love

January 18, 2013 at 5:42 PM

Thanks very much. Lola.

January 18, 2013 at 2:00 PM

Enjoyed reading your New Year's Resolution..Congratulatons on your win..Sara

January 18, 2013 at 3:14 PM

Thank you very much.

Andrea Dietrich

January 17, 2013 at 11:27 PM

this is a very nicely done limerick, great meter, rhyme and humor. Congrats, Iola.

January 18, 2013 at 2:55 AM

Thanks very much.

January 15, 2013 at 10:39 AM

Very good New Year Resolution by you here Lola.Congrats on your win in the contest.

January 15, 2013 at 1:32 PM

Thank you.

Poet Destroyer A

January 15, 2013 at 8:39 AM

Lola, ~ congratulations with the awesome win in Rix's "A Limerick in My Pocket Contest " contest.

January 15, 2013 at 1:33 PM

Thanks again for your comment. Lola.

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

January 15, 2013 at 7:39 AM

Congratulations Lola xx

January 15, 2013 at 1:33 PM

Thank you. Lola.

January 15, 2013 at 5:50 AM

nice one! congrats!

January 15, 2013 at 1:33 PM

Thanks very much.

December 31, 2012 at 3:00 PM

Lola I second that...David

January 15, 2013 at 1:34 PM

Thanks very much. Lola.

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