Anne-Lise Andresen Poet Diamante

- New Winter -

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                                              Winter
                                           Dark, cold
                                  Snowy, whirling, shining
                        * Frozen, snowflakes, snowman,melts *
                                    Birth, buds, beautiful
                                           Music, lyrics
                                               Spring
                                                  *





08.11.2014
Sponsor: Regina Riddle
Contest Name Diamante Poem
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- Thank you for my 2nd place :)

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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders November 23, 2014 at 10:06 PM Congrats on a wonderful win, Anne Lise! A lovely diamante...hugs, Rhonda Anne-Lise Andresen November 24, 2014 at 3:27 AM - Thanks for the congrats and visit, Rhonda - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Sara Kendrick November 21, 2014 at 9:51 AM I see your name is on the winner's list..Let me salute you and enjoy the bliss..Congrats..Sara Anne-Lise Andresen November 21, 2014 at 1:46 PM - Thanks for the congrats and visit, Sara - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Andrea Dietrich November 20, 2014 at 11:01 PM this one is REALLY Nice, love that blending into spring . Congrats. Anne-Lise Andresen November 21, 2014 at 2:13 AM - Thanks for the congrats and visit, Andrea - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

James Fraser November 19, 2014 at 3:01 PM Nicely crafted Anne Lise, and a New Winter is upon us, James :) :) Anne-Lise Andresen November 19, 2014 at 4:00 PM - Thanks for the congrats and visit, James - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Teddy Kimathi November 19, 2014 at 3:32 AM I felt as though I was touching a diamond piece in winter, after reading your piece. Showers of applause to your WIN Anne- Lise! ^_^ Anne-Lise Andresen November 19, 2014 at 4:00 PM - Thanks for the congrats and visit, Teddy - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Kayod5 Kayode November 18, 2014 at 10:32 AM Sorry my massage Comes a bit late,I'm just somehow busy here; congrats on this merited win Anne...huggs Anne-Lise Andresen November 18, 2014 at 11:58 AM - Never too late - thanks for the congrats and visit,Kayod5 - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud November 18, 2014 at 10:31 AM magical melody that deserves a shining win,anne.. my cheery congrats to you! Anne-Lise Andresen November 18, 2014 at 11:57 AM - Thanks for the congrats and visit, Nette - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Phyllis Babcock November 17, 2014 at 12:33 PM Awesome one on this Diamante Anne Lise. love phyl Anne-Lise Andresen November 17, 2014 at 12:47 PM - Thanks for friendly and lovely comments on my "little diamond" dear Phyllis - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Sandra Haight November 17, 2014 at 9:22 AM Hi Anne Lise, I love the subject for your Diamante poem and how winter so gently slides into spring. Nice wording. Congrats on your win! Hugs, Sandra Anne-Lise Andresen November 17, 2014 at 11:55 AM - Thanks for the congrats and visit, Sandra - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Joseph May November 17, 2014 at 6:25 AM Beautiful Diamante Anne...Congrats on your win Anne-Lise Andresen November 17, 2014 at 7:21 AM - Thanks for the congrats and visit, Joseph - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Earl Schumacker November 17, 2014 at 6:19 AM Hi Anne Lise, Beautiful, well structured, meaningful diamante. You always find a way to spice things up. Congratulations on a great win. I hope you have a wonderful day. Take care. Earl Anne-Lise Andresen November 17, 2014 at 7:20 AM - Thanks for the congrats and lovely visit, Earl - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Paul Callus November 16, 2014 at 4:34 PM Winter is ok once you know that spring is on the way!! Congrats on your deserved high placing. /x/ paul Anne-Lise Andresen November 16, 2014 at 11:25 PM - Thanks for the congrats and visit, Paul - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Brenda Meier-Hans November 16, 2014 at 4:25 PM Congratulations on your win for this lovely Diamante Anne Lise Anne-Lise Andresen November 16, 2014 at 11:24 PM - Thanks for the congrats and visit, Brenda - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison November 16, 2014 at 2:56 PM dropping back with my congrats:-) hugs Jan xx Anne-Lise Andresen November 16, 2014 at 4:17 PM - Thanks for the congrats, Jan - I will read the winning list tomorrow - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Ingvar Thorisdottir November 16, 2014 at 4:58 AM Wonderfully appropriate seeing as how we had our first snow yesterday and I can see my breath while I walk my dog. I appreciate this work. Anne-Lise Andresen November 16, 2014 at 5:03 AM - I have a little puppy who has not seen snow yet .... will be interesting :))) - Thanks for friendly and lovely comments on my "little diamond" Ingvar - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

James Marshall Goff November 16, 2014 at 3:45 AM Schneikies! Anne Lise! Also wanted to concur....i am looking out my condo window at 3" of newly fallen snow and single-digit temperatures! jimbo Anne-Lise Andresen November 16, 2014 at 4:54 AM - Winter is here .... but no snow yet :) - Thanks for friendly and lovely comments on my "little diamond" James - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

James Marshall Goff November 16, 2014 at 3:41 AM Love the snowflakes in your shaped poem, Anne Lise! Nice work! jimbo Anne-Lise Andresen November 16, 2014 at 4:55 AM - Thank you :))

Wilma Neels November 15, 2014 at 12:55 AM Beautiful theme you chose Anne Lise ;) xx hope your weekend is a great one.. Anne-Lise Andresen November 15, 2014 at 6:54 AM - Thanks for friendly and nice comments on my "little diamond" Wilma - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Scott Thirtyseven November 13, 2014 at 11:31 AM Sounds as though you are getting ready to miss winter before it's even begun. Anne-Lise Andresen November 13, 2014 at 11:43 AM - I dream of spring all year :))) - The winters are arrived to Norway :) - Thanks for friendly and nice comments on my "little diamond" Scott - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Maurice Yvonne November 13, 2014 at 8:59 AM Beautiful words, beautiful snowflake. Anne-Lise Andresen November 13, 2014 at 9:21 AM - Thanks for friendly and nice comments on my "little diamond",Maurice ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud November 11, 2014 at 6:47 AM :) hi, anne! Anne-Lise Andresen November 11, 2014 at 7:59 AM :)) hi, Nette!

Arty Rico Jones November 10, 2014 at 5:43 PM Very good poem, nice visions of winter, add some Christmas lights for some spice. Anne-Lise Andresen November 11, 2014 at 3:03 AM - Thanks for friendly and nice comments on my "little diamond",Arty ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

James Fraser November 10, 2014 at 4:56 PM You'll have it quicker than us Anne Lise, but mild I hope, James :) Anne-Lise Andresen November 11, 2014 at 3:01 AM - Here in Western Norway no snow yet, but cold at night - Thanks for friendly and nice comments on my "little diamond" James! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Andrea Dietrich November 10, 2014 at 4:09 PM this is wonderful. But to let you know, I think the middle line, your last two nouns have to be related to spring!! Anne-Lise Andresen November 11, 2014 at 3:02 AM - Thanks for friendly and nice comments on my "little diamond" Andrea ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :) Anne-Lise Andresen November 11, 2014 at 2:26 AM Example /Diammante poem Line 1: Winter = 1 NOUN-A Line 2: Rainy, cold = 2 ADJECTIVES-A Line 3: Skiing, skating, sledding = 3 GERUNDS-A (verb + -ing) Line 4: Mountains, wind, breeze, ocean = 2 NOUNS-A + 2 NOUNS-B Line 5: Swimming, surfing, scuba diving = 3 GERUNDS-B (verb + -ing) Line 6: Sunny, hot = 2 ADJECTIVES-B Line 7: Summer = 1 NOUN-B

Timothy Hicks November 10, 2014 at 2:19 PM Beautiful diamante. I liked how you threw in music and lyrics to describe spring - very fitting for the season. Anne-Lise Andresen November 10, 2014 at 3:01 PM - Timothy, thanks for friendly and nice comments on my "little diamond" ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

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