New Wave

None of us are together,
Enough we had from each other.
Wondering why we are falling appart

Winds are blowing differently,
Another turn to be 
Vain or victory days are there,
Each of them will come back to us
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Andresen Avatar
January 23, 2024 at 10:50 AM
- You are skilled with Acrostic poems, Maria ... (I rarely have the patience to write this form :))) - hugs
Fernandez-Garcia Avatar
January 23, 2024 at 11:53 AM
Thank you Anne. Still a long way to be good at, but I really like this style. It's like a game for me. Have a good evening. Hugsxxx
Buhagiar Avatar
January 22, 2024 at 1:39 AM
There's a contrast between these two lovers. Will they stick it out?
Fernandez-Garcia Avatar
January 22, 2024 at 2:47 AM
Hello Victor. Perhaps, but second parts are different. Have a great week my friend
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace