New Wave

None of us are together, Enough we had from each other. Wondering why we are falling appart Winds are blowing differently, Another turn to be Vain or victory days are there, Each of them will come back to us

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Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/23/2024 10:50:00 AM

- You are skilled with Acrostic poems, Maria ... (I rarely have the patience to write this form :))) - hugs

Maria Fernandez-Garcia
Date: 1/23/2024 11:53:00 AM

Thank you Anne. Still a long way to be good at, but I really like this style. It's like a game for me. Have a good evening. Hugsxxx

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 1/22/2024 8:47:00 AM

your usual soft and poetic style shines through with this Acrostic poem. Hard when winds blow differently in any relationship...and you captured that questioning beautifully. Have a splendid day, hugs, Sara

Maria Fernandez-Garcia
Date: 1/22/2024 9:41:00 AM

Thank you so much Sara for your always kind words. Have a nice afternoon. Hugsxxx

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 1/22/2024 1:39:00 AM

There's a contrast between these two lovers. Will they stick it out?

Maria Fernandez-Garcia
Date: 1/22/2024 2:47:00 AM

Hello Victor. Perhaps, but second parts are different. Have a great week my friend