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New Waitress In Town

Just swiped my card I can hear footsteps all around Plates and cups banging A tray falls on the ground In, out, corner, behind you Meals over, Bring ice cream You just have to No ice to scoop Appetizers are cold Kitchen is backed up Sometimes it gets so old Your new so they'll test you Try to cheat you out of tips, This “co-worker”..not quite legit One might have pulled a fast one But a mistake only happens once Next time you need food run Your on your own son

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 1/7/2013 5:47:00 PM
That was a good one, especially forming the shape and keeping the story flowing, Dave
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Lynn Dolly
Date: 1/7/2013 7:59:00 PM
Thank you Dave! Nice to meet you :)

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