New Snow

in cursive shadows
a sun mused elm composes
    on pristine parchment

      ~~11 Dec 2016~~
         Troika Contest

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Charlie Smith

Date: 1/17/2017 1:17:00 PM

Lovely, congratulations David...

Afzal Nusker

Date: 1/14/2017 10:39:00 PM

Splendid Haiku. Congratulations on your first place win, David.

Sonia Walker

Date: 1/14/2017 8:16:00 PM

David, congratulations on your top win. A lovely Haiku to read. ~ Sonia

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 1/14/2017 6:06:00 PM

So beautiful, David! Congrats on your top win!

Deborah Burch

Date: 1/14/2017 5:52:00 PM

Beautiful!! David!! Congratulations!!! Very well done!!:) deb

Joseph May

Date: 1/14/2017 4:03:00 PM

Congrats on your top win David

Phil Capitano

Date: 1/14/2017 3:47:00 PM

Who is that masked man? Great win David.

Agnes Krampe

Date: 1/14/2017 3:06:00 PM

Congrats on your win, David. Great Haiku.

Reason A. Poteet

Date: 1/14/2017 2:48:00 PM

your imagery is most unique here, david. Congratulations on your placement.

John Lawless

Date: 1/14/2017 1:15:00 PM

David, this poem offered so many brilliant visual temptations and imagery. Thanks for participating and WOW....

David Mohn
Date: 1/14/2017 9:56:00 PM

thank you John...much appreciated

Paul Callus

Date: 12/30/2016 2:48:00 PM

Well done...beautifully composed, David...very poetical! Wishing you all the very best for the new year! // paul

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/17/2016 9:05:00 PM

You ROCK where haiku are concerned, David. Just one more example of why you are about the best there is at this form.

Jan Allison

Date: 12/14/2016 8:13:00 AM

absolutely beautiful David:-) good luck:-) hugs Jan xx

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