New Snow

in cursive shadows
a sun mused elm composes
    on pristine parchment

      ~~11 Dec 2016~~
         Troika Contest

snowsuntreehaiku

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Charlie Smith

January 17, 2017 at 1:17 PM

Lovely, congratulations David...

Afzal Nusker

January 14, 2017 at 10:39 PM

Splendid Haiku. Congratulations on your first place win, David.

Sonia Walker

January 14, 2017 at 8:16 PM

David, congratulations on your top win. A lovely Haiku to read. ~ Sonia

Kim Rodrigues

January 14, 2017 at 6:06 PM

So beautiful, David! Congrats on your top win!

Deborah Burch

January 14, 2017 at 5:52 PM

Beautiful!! David!! Congratulations!!! Very well done!!:) deb

Joseph May

January 14, 2017 at 4:03 PM

Congrats on your top win David

Phil Capitano

January 14, 2017 at 3:47 PM

Who is that masked man? Great win David.

Agnes Krampe

January 14, 2017 at 3:06 PM

Congrats on your win, David. Great Haiku.

Reason A. Poteet

January 14, 2017 at 2:48 PM

your imagery is most unique here, david. Congratulations on your placement.

John Lawless

January 14, 2017 at 1:15 PM

David, this poem offered so many brilliant visual temptations and imagery. Thanks for participating and WOW....

David Mohn

January 14, 2017 at 9:56 PM

thank you John...much appreciated

Paul Callus

December 30, 2016 at 2:48 PM

Well done...beautifully composed, David...very poetical! Wishing you all the very best for the new year! // paul

Andrea Dietrich

December 17, 2016 at 9:05 PM

You ROCK where haiku are concerned, David. Just one more example of why you are about the best there is at this form.

Jan Allison

December 14, 2016 at 8:13 AM

absolutely beautiful David:-) good luck:-) hugs Jan xx

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