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The clouds belch and sky flashes its touch, Then the clouds spread their dark blankets over us ;as the sky shed cold tears, These drops of tears wash off the dirt on leaves of plants, dusts on aluminium and zinc roofing sheets; and the wind moves speedily pulling the roofs, doors and electric poles, whistling along as the sheets drum; and dusts swirl round… dancing to the rhythm. A baby is born, Farmers rejoice for the conception of this new born child; their expectation turns to reality; New life sprouts out of the ground As the ground drinks out of these tear drops; Paper,leaves and plastic materials compete With the tadpoles in the rivers and canals. The breeze touches my skin with cozy soothing hands, which is very reassuring that a better child is here. *Personification Date: 7-14-2014

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Date: 7/29/2014 6:22:00 PM
Olusegun, Congratulations, enjoyed your free verse poem..Linda
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Date: 7/23/2014 3:54:00 AM
Congrats for your well, deserved win Olusegun! :-)
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Date: 7/21/2014 2:43:00 AM
Great win Olusegun..congrats
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Date: 7/21/2014 12:10:00 AM
Cute lovely write Olusegun ! Congrats on big win!
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Date: 7/20/2014 1:29:00 PM
Congratulations, Olusegun, on a great, well-deserved win!
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Date: 7/20/2014 1:03:00 AM
here's to a new world painted with your fresh brush, olu.. sweet congrats and huggs
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Date: 7/19/2014 9:27:00 PM
Charlotte is right. this is a very intriguing poem indeed. Great imagery, my friend..Congrats for your win in this awesome contest.
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Date: 7/19/2014 6:22:00 PM
some effective descriptions in this, and it's a very intriguing piece; it had me returning to read it over and over! congrats on your win in my contest :)
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Date: 7/19/2014 5:25:00 PM
Olusegun, enjoyed. Congrats! on your fine win... Verlena
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Date: 7/19/2014 4:28:00 PM
Way to go ....Congrats..Sara
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