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Notes About The Poem

New Rose---Tb

Wife's smile BESTOWS
grace... he KNOWS that
new ROSE would come.

On fourth day, JUNE
their babe’s CROON trills--
a NOON divine!



Any Theme Than Bauk
Contest of Charles Messina  1/30/2019

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Jan Allison Date: 2/13/2019 3:29:00 PM oh so sweet Nette, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx Login to Reply

Alexis Y. Date: 2/11/2019 11:44:00 AM Hi Nette, This is such an adorable and well written write. Congratulations on a well deserved:-) Alexis Login to Reply

Charles Messina Date: 2/11/2019 7:52:00 AM I love this one, Nette. Great write! And that pic of that adorable child. Congratulations on your placement in my contest. Hugs Charlie Login to Reply

Carolyn Devonshire Date: 2/11/2019 6:13:00 AM Oh, I remember this one well and was hoping it would be a winner, Nette. Congratulations on your win in Charlie's contest! Hugs, Carolyn Login to Reply

Joanna Daniel Date: 2/10/2019 10:05:00 PM Very cute, Nette... congratulations on your win:) Login to Reply

Darlene De Beaulieu Date: 2/9/2019 12:01:00 PM Hello Nette, this is a cute baby girl. I feel like I want to hug her. A beautiful poem. Have a nice day my friend. Login to Reply

Paul Callus Date: 2/1/2019 12:24:00 PM The content of this poem is in itself divine, Nette, though I can't comment on the form which I still have to acquaint myself with. Hugs // paul Login to Reply

Jennifer Proxenos Date: 2/1/2019 11:33:00 AM P.S. Good Luck - holding thumbs. Jennifer. Login to Reply

Jennifer Proxenos Date: 2/1/2019 11:32:00 AM Hi Nette, Love the poem and the pic - both shine with love and hope. Beautifully penned. poetry hugs, Jennifer. Login to Reply

Vladislav Raven Date: 2/1/2019 6:08:00 AM Hi Nette, this is such a beautiful Than-Bauk. The theme, the content, they sing so gently into the heart. Excellent work. Wishing you all the best in the contest. Have a wonderful Friday. Hugs....Mike. XX Login to Reply

Duke Beaufort Date: 2/1/2019 4:20:00 AM I'm with Kim below--what a wonderful assemblage of words!! Ahhhhh! Login to Reply

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 1/31/2019 6:32:00 PM - I tried a Than Bauk poem today ... but, it went in the trash ... I like yours, very well done, Nette - A gorgeous "rose":) - Good luck in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply

Kim Rodrigues Date: 1/31/2019 3:25:00 PM Beautiful! Login to Reply

Banjo Casto Date: 1/31/2019 1:08:00 PM Superb write! I'd call this " nervously anticipating." Been there and it was a miracle to watch my own rose come into the world. Login to Reply

Line Gauthier Date: 1/30/2019 10:52:00 PM Very clever how you highlighted your rhymes, nette. Login to Reply

Carolyn Devonshire Date: 1/30/2019 5:21:00 PM Both your poem and the photo are so precious, Nette. Best wishes in the contest. (My sister was born June 4th - Gemini with two personalities:) Best wishes, carolyn Login to Reply

Harry Horsman Date: 1/30/2019 5:00:00 PM Your on a winner here, nette..love it. Login to Reply

Laura Leiser Date: 1/30/2019 4:33:00 PM Love the theme of a new baby here in your fine poem, Nette! Good luck in the contest! :) Login to Reply

Vijay Pandit Date: 1/30/2019 4:07:00 PM A sweet photo..and lovely poem. Login to Reply

Gershon Wolf Date: 1/30/2019 3:29:00 PM I'll tell you honestly that I've read this TB carefully through four times. Each time it is more and more meaningful and lovely. Is there anything more precious than this 'life of a rose?' P.S. I am definitely not betting against this in the contest. Methinks it's magical, nette. Best wishes, Gershon Login to Reply