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Wife's smile BESTOWS grace... he KNOWS that new ROSE would come. On fourth day, JUNE their babe’s CROON trills-- a NOON divine! Any Theme Than Bauk Contest of Charles Messina 1/30/2019

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Jan Allison

Date: 2/13/2019 3:29:00 PM

oh so sweet Nette, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Alexis Y.

Date: 2/11/2019 11:44:00 AM

Hi Nette, This is such an adorable and well written write. Congratulations on a well deserved:-) Alexis

Charles Messina

Date: 2/11/2019 7:52:00 AM

I love this one, Nette. Great write! And that pic of that adorable child. Congratulations on your placement in my contest. Hugs Charlie

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 2/11/2019 6:13:00 AM

Oh, I remember this one well and was hoping it would be a winner, Nette. Congratulations on your win in Charlie's contest! Hugs, Carolyn

Joanna Daniel

Date: 2/10/2019 10:05:00 PM

Very cute, Nette... congratulations on your win:)

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 2/9/2019 12:01:00 PM

Hello Nette, this is a cute baby girl. I feel like I want to hug her. A beautiful poem. Have a nice day my friend.

Paul Callus

Date: 2/1/2019 12:24:00 PM

The content of this poem is in itself divine, Nette, though I can't comment on the form which I still have to acquaint myself with. Hugs // paul

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 2/1/2019 11:33:00 AM

P.S. Good Luck - holding thumbs. Jennifer.

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 2/1/2019 11:32:00 AM

Hi Nette, Love the poem and the pic - both shine with love and hope. Beautifully penned. poetry hugs, Jennifer.

Vladislav Raven

Date: 2/1/2019 6:08:00 AM

Hi Nette, this is such a beautiful Than-Bauk. The theme, the content, they sing so gently into the heart. Excellent work. Wishing you all the best in the contest. Have a wonderful Friday. Hugs....Mike. XX

Duke Beaufort

Date: 2/1/2019 4:20:00 AM

I'm with Kim below--what a wonderful assemblage of words!! Ahhhhh!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/31/2019 6:32:00 PM

- I tried a Than Bauk poem today ... but, it went in the trash ... I like yours, very well done, Nette - A gorgeous "rose":) - Good luck in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 1/31/2019 3:25:00 PM

Beautiful!

Banjo Casto

Date: 1/31/2019 1:08:00 PM

Superb write! I'd call this " nervously anticipating." Been there and it was a miracle to watch my own rose come into the world.

Line Gauthier

Date: 1/30/2019 10:52:00 PM

Very clever how you highlighted your rhymes, nette.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 1/30/2019 5:21:00 PM

Both your poem and the photo are so precious, Nette. Best wishes in the contest. (My sister was born June 4th - Gemini with two personalities:) Best wishes, carolyn

Harry Horsman

Date: 1/30/2019 5:00:00 PM

Your on a winner here, nette..love it.

Laura Leiser

Date: 1/30/2019 4:33:00 PM

Love the theme of a new baby here in your fine poem, Nette! Good luck in the contest! :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 1/30/2019 4:07:00 PM

A sweet photo..and lovely poem.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 1/30/2019 3:29:00 PM

I'll tell you honestly that I've read this TB carefully through four times. Each time it is more and more meaningful and lovely. Is there anything more precious than this 'life of a rose?' P.S. I am definitely not betting against this in the contest. Methinks it's magical, nette. Best wishes, Gershon