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A wish, faint and fading, brings tears to eyes; a wish we know cannot come true. Life suddenly can bring a dark surprise that breaks our human hearts in two, and suffering for all begins anew. His lovely, younger sister passed last year, nine months ago...pain still not healed. Now, younger brother heading there...we fear prognosis for his passing, sealed... the plunge into no hope...no cure...revealed. My dearest husband, oldest of the three, says he, with death, should bear the curse... be number one to leave the family; the order should have been reversed... those oldest rose petals, from stems, fall first. This fading wish to heal will not be met; new pain of loss he soon must face. As oldest, left alone, he feels regret both siblings' time he will outpace... the void within his soul, with pain, embrace. Sandra M. Haight ~3rd Place~ Contest: Let Your Pen Drip Sponsor: Broken Wings Theme Chosen: 'a wish faint and fading' Words to include: suffering plunge rose soul Judged: 05/22/2018 True...

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Date: 6/5/2018 9:20:00 PM
A heartfelt read. Congrats on your well deserved top win, Sandra.
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Date: 5/23/2018 10:37:00 AM
Sandra, congratulations on your win in my contest with this awesome write, well done ~
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Sandra Haight
Date: 5/28/2018 7:53:00 PM
Thank you so much, Constance. I always enjoy your contests and I appreciate my nice placement. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 5/23/2018 7:42:00 AM
Congratulations Sandra :)
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Sandra Haight
Date: 5/28/2018 7:52:00 PM
Thank you very much, Heidi! Hugs, Sandra
Date: 5/23/2018 2:34:00 AM
Congratulations, Sandra on your win. A nicely penned poetic narration of a sad tale.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 5/28/2018 7:51:00 PM
Thank you so much, Subimal, for your congrats and support. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 5/22/2018 9:01:00 PM
Goodness. Congratulations on your win. Such a well-written poem but oh so heartfelt a poem. Prayers for your family tonight. Sorry for your losses.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 5/28/2018 7:49:00 PM
Thank you very much, Susan, for your congratulations on supportive comments and prayers. Much appreciated. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 5/21/2018 4:28:00 PM
Losing a loved one is unbearable and although with time the grief lessens, it never leaves you. You have written about this grief well Sandra. Sorry for your loss. Tom.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 5/22/2018 5:12:00 PM
Thank you, Tom, for your supportive comments. Much appreciated. Sandra
Date: 5/21/2018 11:21:00 AM
Oh so sad and this really reached me. Very well written Sandra. I am sorry for the pain of such loss. It hurts so much. Good luck in the contest!
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Sandra Haight
Date: 5/22/2018 5:10:00 PM
Thank you for reading my poem, and your very supportive comments, Heidi. Going through some sad times right now. Hugs, Sandra

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