New Love

I have learned
to dream again,
dance cloud dances,
wear a dress of sunset red,
thirteen veils of air
that swirl around me.

It is raining flowers-
why
does nobody notice?

I shake a few butterflies from my hair,
smile at the old Chagall,
and fly off to meet you.

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I wrote this poem in German when I had just fallen in love with the man who is now my husband. Translated it into English 30 years later.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Gauthier Avatar
March 6, 2018 at 10:34 PM
Your poem is lovely, Agnes. Congrats on your win. I love the story associated with this poem.
Marcum Wong Avatar
February 27, 2018 at 1:56 AM
What a lovely way to remember your budding love with this romantic poem Agnes. I am sure it is even more special now after the passing years! Congratulations on your win! : )
Scars Avatar
February 26, 2018 at 5:47 AM
what a great tribute and so cool it's from 30 years ago in German! great poem sweet Agnes, thank you and congrats : )-luloo
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June 18, 2017 at 10:13 AM
A very beautifully written romantic poem, I really like reading it, it s curious isn t it that how love can change you, you just wanted to impress your partner and how it changed you, it completely change your lifestyle, your started to enjoy things that once look boring, it s simply amazing however I m new on this site and would really appreciate if you could find time to read my poems and give your honest reviews about them
Capitano Avatar
March 21, 2017 at 7:45 AM
Very romantic, congrats on your win.
Krampe Avatar
March 28, 2017 at 8:30 AM
Thanks, Phil.
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March 16, 2017 at 9:37 AM
Loved it Agnes,congrats!
Krampe Avatar
March 28, 2017 at 8:30 AM
Thank you, Sara.
May Avatar
March 15, 2017 at 5:31 PM
Love is a season as lovely as the spring..Congrats on your win
Krampe Avatar
March 28, 2017 at 8:30 AM
Thank you, Joseph!
White Avatar
March 15, 2017 at 2:58 AM
Oh Agnes, what a wonderful poem! Such a well deserved placement.
Krampe Avatar
March 28, 2017 at 8:31 AM
Thank you, Darren.
Allison Avatar
March 14, 2017 at 12:42 PM
Agnes this is so so beautiful I love imagery and the way you formatted the poem in short perfect lines:-) You have such a lovely way with words my friend:-) hugs Jan xx
Krampe Avatar
March 14, 2017 at 2:17 PM
Thanks for your kind words, Jan. I find it incredibly difficult to translate my poetry because there is inevitably something that does not survive the transition.
Dutta Avatar
March 14, 2017 at 12:22 PM
Congrats Agnes to win top position on your lovely poem. Hugs
Krampe Avatar
March 14, 2017 at 2:15 PM
Thanks, Anisha.
Smith Avatar
March 14, 2017 at 8:52 AM
Beautiful Agnes, congratulations,,,
Krampe Avatar
March 14, 2017 at 2:15 PM
Thanks, Charlie.
Pett Avatar
March 14, 2017 at 8:21 AM
Congratulations Agnes on 1st place win, lovely poetry, Roy. :))
Krampe Avatar
March 14, 2017 at 2:15 PM
Thanks, Roy.
Sands Avatar
March 14, 2017 at 8:15 AM
Congratulations Agnes! :)
Krampe Avatar
March 14, 2017 at 2:15 PM
Thanks, Heidi.
Marie Avatar
February 21, 2017 at 2:57 AM
Such pretty words you paint on the joy of love in so few lines. Wonderful writing, a pleasure to read :-) blessings, lynn
Krampe Avatar
March 14, 2017 at 7:01 AM
Thanks for your kind comment and your visit, Lynn.
Dietrich Avatar
February 19, 2017 at 7:06 PM
LOVE LOVE LOVE it!!!
Krampe Avatar
March 14, 2017 at 7:01 AM
Thanks, Andrea.
Gupta Avatar
February 18, 2017 at 9:00 AM
Very rich expression of love ...
Krampe Avatar
March 14, 2017 at 7:00 AM
Thanks, Probir.
Guzzi Avatar
February 17, 2017 at 2:47 PM
It sure does sound like love Agnes, thanks for stopping by my verse. Light & Love
Krampe Avatar
March 14, 2017 at 7:00 AM
Thank you, Debbie.
Green Avatar
February 17, 2017 at 2:42 PM
This is amazing Agnes, I really enjoyed this. So many good lines in this and it is a short poem, so that says a lot about your talent.
Krampe Avatar
March 14, 2017 at 7:00 AM
Thanks for your kind words, Chris.
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