New Leaf

Sprouting from its pod Reaching for the golden rays, In a sun filled sky.

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Vince Suzadail Jr.

Date: 6/18/2009 1:37:00 PM

I wonder what Eve said if Adam wanted to turn over a new leaf. HMMMMmm! Nicely written. Have a great day, Raul. Vince

Alli B.

Date: 6/17/2009 2:31:00 PM

This was lovely. Enjoyed it much. With love, alli

Diane Christian

Date: 6/12/2009 12:26:00 AM

aww so wonderful, we like leaves on a tree sometimes God prunes us to keep us growing and he always gives us a chance to turn over a new leaf. God bless you from diane

Donna Golden

Date: 6/11/2009 2:25:00 PM

Something is always about to begin... fresh and new. That is HOPE, my friend. Thank you for this reminder! Donna

Cherica Eckiwaudah

Date: 6/11/2009 12:18:00 PM

beautiful. loved the the middle line

Sharon Winter

Date: 6/11/2009 11:59:00 AM

Always excellent Raul. You are fairly intimidating with your talent. : ) Love, Shar

Brian Strand

Date: 6/11/2009 7:45:00 AM

Lovely picture Raul.Rgds Brian & thanks for your blog comment today.

Christopher Higgins

Date: 6/11/2009 6:46:00 AM

The first two lines nailed this beauty..good work brother.

James Fraser

Date: 6/11/2009 2:25:00 AM

Another delightful Haiku from the master>James