New Horizons

As the sun rises The pain takes itself away She starts life anew!
By: Misty Leccese © November 14, 2010
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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November 16, 2010 at 7:11 AM
Carolyn, yes it has been some trying times here as of late. But the good Lord never puts us through something that we can't come out stronger for. I have truly missed writing and it is very nice to be back. Andrea, thanks to you commenting on my poetry. That is what brought me back to the soup. Lots of Love to you both ladies!
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November 15, 2010 at 7:22 PM
Misty this is a sweet senryu and filled with hope. It could be taken as emotional pain she suffers thru the dark of night, which leaves with the sun. Or perhaps physcial ailment. Or maybe a one night thing and with the sun, she finds relief from sorrow. In any event, very nice. LUv, Andrea
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November 15, 2010 at 12:39 PM
Hon, it seems like you may have gone through some difficult times while you were away from the Soup. This is a good place to start life anew. You have family here. I can really relate to this message, dear. Very nicely expressed. I have been off for a couple days, but it's so nice to see you posting new poetry. Love, Carolyn
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