New Horizons

I teeter on the brink of possibility. 
The sun on the new horizon glistens 
its rays on the undulating sea of change. 

I gaze a while, drifting with a squawking gull, 
or diving with a hunting cormorant - 
lost in my imagination, caught in plausibility. 

Sometimes a gust of wind unsettles my balance; 
I totter into uncertainty, struggling to stand, 
but you take my hand and steady me. 

Now I only look ahead; no way back. 
The chasm is inviting me to jump; 
to take a leap of faith and ditch the doubt. 

I place my baggage at my feet; 
packages of responsibility and confusion 
tucked in neatly and nestling with the past. 

One last tug at the sleeve of my coat 
as they make a last ditch attempt to restrain me, 
and I have jumped - flying through the air, free. 

As I land I see you there smiling and safe, 
arms outreaching.  The promise of the future beckons, 
and looks inviting, exciting and full of hope. 

Once I teetered on the brink of possibility 
now it is a glistening reality.  The sea is calm now.   
And, as the sun sets on the horizon, I am home.



(note: to all my lovely friends who thought I was literally considering leaping into a chasm to 
my death, I can assure that I am most certainly not!!!  It is merely a metaphorocal chasm, 
and I intend to stick around for quite  a while yet. Heavens, I am just about to have a book 
published, life is very good! Thanks so much for your concern though)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008



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Date: 12/3/2008 8:13:00 PM
Helen Wow what a deep write it filled my heart with emotion and thought. I like your use of nature to promote your message! Wonderfully done! Laura :)
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Date: 12/3/2008 1:14:00 PM
Helen this is very touching and not the answer . Love and healing in lyour heart is. I sont know if your just writing or if this is a thought of truth. I hope it is just writing. Please dont be deceived in death there is a time and a place beyoind our control fate is fate let it be time will heal and someday our loved ones will be there again to see in God's repectable time frame. I will pray for you for healing and if this is just a poem God will know. GBU Michael
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Date: 12/3/2008 6:14:00 AM
Helen, your writing always digs deep and evokes such emotion in the reader. I feel this is of course metaphorical, and written brilliantly. Hopefully, there is truth in finding such happiness. Love, Shar
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Date: 12/3/2008 4:21:00 AM
This is a lovely piece of writing. I like the way that it is thought out and the manner in which the voice is introduced in the first line of each stanza. The language is down-to-earth and serves the narration well, allowing the reader to dwell in the poem.
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