New Hope At Dawn

The soft light of the morning sun
Has ended the moonless nightspan
There is no worries to be had
yesterday's wars no more at hand.

I stand in the new dawn's birthlife 
With the clarity of your grace
Within the fibers of my life
The future's taken a new face.

It is no longer sad and gray
Gone are the clouds of rain and grail
It is no longer the shade of black
For the night's hopelessness has failed.

My heart has turned up a beat
As you have come across my way
Let this new delight our soul seal
That we walk hand in hand always.

By CarolineCecile
copyright © 08.07.11
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011


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Date: 8/9/2011 8:32:00 PM
Wish there were no more wars in the world but the news shows that there is still plenty of cruelty around the world. I liked the phrase "moonless nightspan" a lot. Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Date: 8/14/2011 8:26:00 PM
I know what you mean Matthew, although in this poem, I talking about personal wars. :) Thanks for reading. Yours in poetry, Caroline.
Date: 8/9/2011 1:20:00 AM
What a delightfully optimisitic picture you pain. Soft and romantic!
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Date: 8/9/2011 12:59:00 AM
a new hope for a new tomorrow, great message, loved to read from the start to finished. Keep on sharing.
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Date: 8/8/2011 8:51:00 PM
so romantic!! hope this means you have a new love! Light & Love
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Date: 8/8/2011 6:09:00 PM
Great ending that walks so well with this form... bravo.... luv Michael
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