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Flowers of love Looking sweet and smell pretty Giving life to all Lovely Humming Bird Sings a love song to the soul Empty hearts renewed Passion projected Valentines now on the brink Why only today? Poems by Wayland bunch written 1/29/13 10:06pm Ok these are the revisions of my Haiku that have nature references

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/16/2013 11:10:00 PM

yes, WHY only today?? Wouldn't it be amazing if we celebrated love constantly? Very cool idea. Congrats on the win!

Jeremy Martin

Date: 2/16/2013 3:18:00 PM

Hey there, very nice. Congratulations, very sharp writing

Wayland Bunch
Date: 2/16/2013 4:22:00 PM

Thank you so much for reading and your comment.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/16/2013 1:53:00 PM

Hi Wayland, , thank you for the support, and fun loving haiku + questionku... Congrats, with all my heart :-) LINDA

Wayland Bunch
Date: 2/16/2013 4:21:00 PM

thanks so much for your comment and a wonderful contest that you hosted, that allowed me to investigate this form.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/30/2013 8:39:00 PM

awe... I like the way, you did not remove the first ones you did... thanks for getting your eyes checked... LOL... <---kidding... glad you caught the note about nature... give me give me....~PD

Wayland Bunch
Date: 1/31/2013 12:57:00 AM

Yeah I was sure you were right. I had just got so caught up trying to learn about the form I missed that detail. Yeah I decided to leave them. I have yet to remove a poem yet. I was gonna remove that hello-goodbye one, but I keep the count running lol.

Seren Roberts

Date: 1/29/2013 11:11:00 PM

Loved both versions....Seren

Wayland Bunch
Date: 1/30/2013 12:05:00 AM

Thank you so much Seren for your very nice comment.

Marvin G. Celestial

Date: 1/29/2013 9:43:00 PM

Great poem! I love to write Haiku too!

Wayland Bunch
Date: 1/30/2013 12:05:00 AM

Gracias. These were my first attempts at the haiku, but I do like the form, although I'm still not totally familiar with it.