New Friend

Met a beautiful Golden Retriever
on its walk around
crown hill park.

Such a sweet precious dog,
her master said she
loves everyone,

so right he was,
such wet kisses
she gave away.

wrote 11-17-08

at crown hill park
Denver co.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Jordan Avatar
November 18, 2008 at 4:03 PM
Reminds me of our Rebel who we had to put to sleep - As always your heart is a cut above the rest - God Bless Michael
Torres Avatar
November 18, 2008 at 2:33 PM
I love this James. I have a Goden Retriever his name is chieff he's my buddy for life. He would have given you licks to. A new poet joined here and humbled me with a poem about me his name is Raul Moreno if you have any time left in your busy schedule I would thank you so much to comment on a few of his being new he doesnt get many comments and it bothers me when youwrite something and it goes unnoticed. God's love to lyou James's and your's Michael Torres
Christian Avatar
November 18, 2008 at 2:13 AM
awww qute, I dont have a dog at the moment but this is just great, and they do say a dog is a mans best friend god bles from diane
Richards Avatar
November 17, 2008 at 6:51 PM
We've had several Golden Retriever's over the years. (Tawny, Shiloh were the last two). They are the most wonderful, warm-hearted dog friends a person could ever have! We now have a Golden Lab...He's pretty sweet too, but I miss our others still! Sweet poem, James! Carrie
Winter Avatar
November 17, 2008 at 4:03 PM
Aww, how sweet. Maybe you will see her more often. I love dogs too. Love, Shar
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