New Day Rising - Ziket

songbirds trill a serenade
dawn awakens



August 14, 2020
2-Line Poem - ziket poetry contest
Sponsor: Line Gauthier
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Radhakrishna Avatar
August 18, 2020 at 11:02 PM
Congrats on your win and a Good morning Ziket! Lovely image!
Logan Avatar
August 19, 2020 at 2:51 AM
Hi Krish, and thanks so much.
Dietrich Avatar
August 18, 2020 at 3:40 PM
such a gem!!! Congrats on a well deserved win.
Logan Avatar
August 18, 2020 at 4:12 PM
Thanks so much for your nice comments, Andrea.
Allison Avatar
August 18, 2020 at 1:25 PM
Dropping back with my congrats Jenna i knew this would fly high:-) hugs Jan xx
Logan Avatar
August 18, 2020 at 4:12 PM
Thank you for coming by again with your congrats, Jan.
Watt Avatar
August 18, 2020 at 1:16 PM
Sounds like my kind of day, Jenna. Perfectly captured in your winning ziket - Congrats! ~ John
Logan Avatar
August 18, 2020 at 4:11 PM
I wake to them before dawn on most mornings, John. It's my favorite time of day. Thanks for your kind compliments.
Mcgee Avatar
August 18, 2020 at 10:19 AM
Beautiful image Jenna...congrats on first place.
Logan Avatar
August 18, 2020 at 4:11 PM
Thank you so very much, Jeanne.
Koplin Avatar
August 18, 2020 at 9:04 AM
Beautifully written Jenna! Congrats on 1st place
Logan Avatar
August 18, 2020 at 4:10 PM
Thank you ever so much for the congrats, Mark.
Ibeh Avatar
August 18, 2020 at 8:37 AM
Awesome two-liner! Congratulations on your top win, Jenna:-)
Logan Avatar
August 18, 2020 at 4:10 PM
Thanks for your kind remarks, Edward. They're appreciated.
Wolf Avatar
August 18, 2020 at 8:12 AM
Back with congrats, Jenna, on your top-drawer finish! Joy and Sunshine, Gershon
Logan Avatar
August 18, 2020 at 4:09 PM
Welcome back and thank you for the joy and sunshine.
Pigeon Tart Avatar
August 18, 2020 at 7:07 AM
Beautifully done! Congratulations for your top win! xomo
Logan Avatar
August 18, 2020 at 4:09 PM
Thanks so much for the congrats, mo.
Wolf Avatar
August 17, 2020 at 8:30 PM
A sweet tweet, this ziket. I especially like the cause-effect of the dawn's awakening. Pretty poem, Jenna!! Light and Joy, Gershon
Logan Avatar
August 18, 2020 at 1:25 AM
Thank you, kind sir. Your comments are always welcomed.
Sands Avatar
August 16, 2020 at 6:00 AM
Very nice Jenna. This brings me into the moment and wakes me for sure :)
Logan Avatar
August 16, 2020 at 11:44 AM
Thank you, Heidi.
Cunningham Avatar
August 15, 2020 at 1:29 AM
Love that time of day, used to hear that often when I got up early for work. Im back now, had a great time away. Enjoy your weekend Tom
Logan Avatar
August 16, 2020 at 4:02 AM
Me, too, Tom. I think a sunrise is more beautiful than a sunset. Thanks and I'm sure you had a wonderful visit with your little ones.
Allison Avatar
August 14, 2020 at 3:55 PM
absolutely stunning imagery Jenna!:-) hugs Jan xx
Logan Avatar
August 16, 2020 at 4:01 AM
Thank you, Jan. I'm so happy you liked it.
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