New Day New Beginning New Life

New Day
     New beginning
          New life

Body still bleeds

   Days have been a pawn of struggles
Quest for long reach upon every dawn 
an ardent mind, a vision of concern
sorrow, sobs, and fears patience mourned
Retch the grim laggard illness unadorned 
idle morns, stark painful weary days, 
hearkened to the long chanting nights bray
warm dreams for a 
     New life..
          New beginning..
               New day


3/17/2017
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Trifiatis Avatar
March 20, 2017 at 8:59 AM
May the new day presents opportunities of pain free hours and peace! A very beautiful and dynamic poem dear, Eve! God bless you!
Sathasivam Avatar
March 19, 2017 at 2:53 AM
Excellent. Well carved poem. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it.
Dietrich Avatar
March 18, 2017 at 10:31 PM
long chanting nights bray. You had such unique imagery in this small poem,Eve. Well done!
Smith Avatar
March 18, 2017 at 1:04 PM
It's a new day...make the best of it.
Gupta Avatar
March 18, 2017 at 9:12 AM
The downward graph warmly goes upward ... beautiful ...
Roper Avatar
March 18, 2017 at 9:08 PM
Thank you, Probir, hugs Eve
Spagnola Avatar
March 18, 2017 at 5:20 AM
Dearest Eve, I greived along with you as your pens images created the deepest empathy...I love how you changed the flow of your write to still manage and emote the hope so neccesary for we humans to contiue to live! Yes "the body still bleeds"...:), jill
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