New Day

new dawn in sight peaceful and bright my heart leaps with joy and delight visioning lovely days our way joining friends and family may occur soon - erasing dark night visioning lovely days our way, dream enlivens weary with hope no more gloominess, don't you mope live life merrily every day new dawn in sight visioning lovely days our way we are more than ready to cope live life merrily every day peaceful and bright peaceful and bright new dawn in sight January 9, 2021 "Meditative Ballad" Premiere Poetry Contest Sponsor: Emile Pinet Syllables checked by howmanysyllables.com Placed Tenth

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Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 2/4/2022 10:42:00 PM

I love your optimistic outlook in this lovely poem Mala. Congratulations on your wonderful win. Blessings xxoo

Valsa George

Date: 2/1/2022 8:47:00 PM

I share your delight in witnessing a beautiful new day dawning. Congratulations dear friend on your prestigious win !

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 2/2/2022 6:42:00 AM

Thanks, Valsa. Really appreciate your encouraging comments.

Christuraj Alex

Date: 1/31/2022 8:16:00 PM

"new dawn in sight peaceful and bright" - Very beautifully written poem. Congratulations!

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 2/2/2022 6:42:00 AM

Thank you, Christuraj. Let's hope new dawn is in sight.

Emile Pinet

Date: 1/31/2022 10:31:00 AM

Congratulations Malabika! Your poem earned a distinguished place in my contest. This contest was difficult, calling for exacting syllable counts and perfect rhymes, as requirements of this form. Well done my friend, Emile.

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 1/31/2022 4:21:00 PM

Thank you, Emile. Feel fortunate to learn a poetic form which is new to me. Best wishes.

Deb M

Date: 1/11/2022 9:36:00 AM

Hi Malabika….a lovely poem very “peaceful and bright” really enjoyed. Debx

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 1/16/2022 6:37:00 PM

Thanks, Deb. Appreciate your comment.

Arjun Jangid

Date: 1/9/2022 5:34:00 PM

Good morning M R Choudhary, Live life merrily everyday, good advice to follow. Lovely amazing j6b

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 1/16/2022 6:38:00 PM

Thanks, Arjun. Really appreciate your thoughtful comment.