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Rejoice in the Day

Collage by Suzanne Delaney

New Dawn

When dawn unfolds before you like a silent rose
Awakens all your senses from a deep repose
Arise unshackled from capricious dreams
Step as you dare on stairs of golden sunbeams

Along the once black tunnels where you learned to breathe
Forget the darkest stars that taught you how to grieve
Float on the air like a magic golden leaf
Rejoice in the day because it is so brief

Now with leafy garlands woven in your hair
Dance lightly on mossy forest stairs
In your floating gown of clouds and sky
Happy and carefree as a butterfly 

When dawn unfolds before you like a dew kissed rose
Awakens your whole soul from deep repose
 Dance away the day because it is so brief
 Sigh at the stars that taught you to believe 


EARLY NOVEMBER PREMIERE CONTEST any form,any theme,max of 25 lines
Contest Judged:  11/4/2017 7:32:00 AM
Sponsored by: Brian Strand
6th. Place
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Wigley Avatar
December 31, 2017 at 1:34 AM
That's twice I've cocked up someone's name tonight, Suz- must be time to sleep. Sorry. have a great new year, Suzy D , Viv x
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December 31, 2017 at 1:18 AM
A bright, breezy, fresh piece, and a wonderfully optimistic write for such a dull dreary December dawn over here. Lovely. have a great new year, Andrea, Viv x
Delaney Avatar
January 6, 2018 at 9:41 AM
Thanks for the kind words, Viv: I don’t mind being mixd up as Andrea.....we have been Poetry partners in crime for a long time....lol Andr...I mean SuZ
Marcum Wong Avatar
December 30, 2017 at 5:18 PM
This poem is so lovely SuZ. I hope you post it at PFT if you haven't already. I love the serenity combined with beautiful imagery. I hope you have a wonderful new year my friend! Blessings, Connie xxoo
Delaney Avatar
January 6, 2018 at 9:43 AM
Thanks so much, Connie: Thanks for your lovely Christmas card as well. Housebound here so a good time to catch up with Soup and PFT. I left a .late Dec Challenge poem there for you and then posted it here. Happy New Year also. Hugs, SuZ
Smith Avatar
December 16, 2017 at 12:33 PM
All that before your first cup of coffee? That's the way to start your day, Lovely write Suzanne...
Krampe Avatar
December 2, 2017 at 11:32 AM
I love the imagery, Suzanne - wonderful. And I love the sentiment. Fave!
Hicks Avatar
December 2, 2017 at 12:05 AM
Hey Suz! If you have time, you should check out my blog. Some updates from my corner of the world. Hope you are enjoying your Christmas season, and sending out your holiday cards :) I've always loved the music this time of year (one of my favorite things about the season).
Horsman Avatar
November 15, 2017 at 3:42 PM
A poem, for one to take stock of life and appreciate it more, love this Suzanne
Delaney Avatar
November 18, 2017 at 8:22 AM
Thanks for your insightful comment, Harry: Always appreciated. SuZ
Wigley Avatar
November 14, 2017 at 9:50 PM
Well done, Suzy, on a lovely piece, bright and vibrant, ideal for us poor sods enduring dull, short, November days. Viv x
Delaney Avatar
November 15, 2017 at 6:57 AM
Dear Viv: Your visit has brightened my short November day. Hugs, SuZ
Dietrich Avatar
November 8, 2017 at 5:24 PM
oh and congrats too . For which contest?
Delaney Avatar
November 8, 2017 at 5:43 PM
It was for Brian Strand’s Early November Premier contest https://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry/contests/early_november_premiere_contest_any_form,any_theme,max_of_25_lines_9962
Dietrich Avatar
November 8, 2017 at 5:23 PM
Suz, this is so lyrical. It's the way I enjoy writing when I am at top form, so I LOVE this one because you did it really well. Wonderful!
Gauthier Avatar
November 5, 2017 at 10:44 AM
Congrats on your win, Suzanne.
Delaney Avatar
November 15, 2017 at 7:02 AM
Thanks, Line : Your words of encouragement mean a lot to me. SuZ
Michael Avatar
November 4, 2017 at 2:34 PM
I enjoyed it, Suzanne...Thaks for sharing...
Delaney Avatar
November 15, 2017 at 7:05 AM
Thanks so much,Arturo for taking time to comment. Always valued. Best, SuZ
One Avatar
November 4, 2017 at 10:30 AM
So nice to see your posting Suzanne... This is a beautiful poem, and I love that first line.. The rose is silent, beautiful and fragrant.. but it can prick you with its thorns... However, you poem is lovely, it rhymes and flows so well..
Delaney Avatar
November 4, 2017 at 10:58 AM
Hello SI: I am so happy to be back posting again and that words that were so still in my heart are flowing again at last. Thanks for reading and encouraging. Hugs, SuZ
Pandit Avatar
November 4, 2017 at 7:24 AM
What a beautiful poem to start the day SuZ--this couplet is a joy to read!
Delaney Avatar
November 4, 2017 at 8:43 AM
Thankyou Vijay: I appreciate your encouragement. Hugs, SuZ
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