James Fraser Poet Rhyme

New Dawn

Daylights colours
Sink into night
Our wonderful views earlier
Have drifted from sight

We awake to new dawns
As nature paints a new day
In our minds we applaud her
In every way




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Andrea Dietrich April 2, 2010 at 9:03 AM Very lovely, James. I really like it! andrea

Gareth James April 2, 2010 at 6:07 AM Nicely written, James. So little words so much description

Francine Roberts April 2, 2010 at 12:49 AM lovely, and thank you so much for your comments on my work

Charles Henderson April 1, 2010 at 8:42 PM Very descriptive james. Thanks for your recent comment on my poem Charles

Dr.Ram Mehta April 1, 2010 at 8:11 PM Nice expressions. I enjoyed it

James Marshall Goff April 1, 2010 at 6:45 PM FILLED WITH POSITIVE ENERGY! BRAVO JAMES! jmg

Sara Kendrick April 1, 2010 at 5:20 PM Very descriptive write with good rhyme and rhythm...Keep the creative pen flowing.. Sara

Carolyn Devonshire April 1, 2010 at 4:59 PM Great rhyme with a colorful vision for the new day! Love, Carolyn