Bl Devnath Poet Footle

New Bride Groom's Pride

New bride 
                                                Groom’s pride

                                                  Few days
                                                   Bill pays

                                                  What needs 
                                                   like feeds

                                                  Time goes
                                                  Less close

                                                 Nose snores
                                                  Night bores

                                                   Old fights
                                                   Life tights 

                       My First footle trial

                       Written on: 09/04/2014

                      Sponsored by: Poet Destroyer A
                      Contest Name:100 in a ROW contest --3

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Skat A July 12, 2016 at 11:24 PM BL, Congratulations on your 101 in a ROW contest number 3 win, Luv SKAT Bl Devnath July 13, 2016 at 10:33 AM Thanks my lovely smiling friend for wishing me congratulation. Loved always, bl

Kim Merryman July 11, 2016 at 4:25 PM Well done, BL! Congrats on your placement in the contest! Bl Devnath July 12, 2016 at 12:12 PM Thanks my lovely friend for your wishes. Loved always, bl

Poet Destroyer A July 9, 2016 at 4:28 AM BL D., Congratulations on your win. Stop by my blog "The Garden Spider" if you like. Nice to have you join my contest. Luv Linda Bl Devnath July 9, 2016 at 11:19 AM Thanks my lovely *friend for enlisting my poem in the winner list and for wishing me congratulation. Loved always, bl

Harry Horsman September 5, 2014 at 10:55 AM these are brilliant BL Bl Devnath September 5, 2014 at 12:36 PM Thanks a lot for your wonderful uplifting comment, my lovely friend. Loved always,bl

Ma Yaseen September 5, 2014 at 1:03 AM simple but beautiful, i like itt. best wishes Bl Devnath September 5, 2014 at 8:11 AM Thanks my poet friend for your comment. Loved always,bl

Andrea Dietrich September 4, 2014 at 9:26 PM hey these are pretty good,BL. the asks/bulks does not rhyme but the others are great!!! Bl Devnath September 5, 2014 at 8:10 AM Thanks a lot for your helping comment. It's my first one, my lovely friend. Loved always,bl

Tim Smith September 4, 2014 at 4:49 PM These are great....two hearts...life starts.....cheers Tim Bl Devnath September 4, 2014 at 5:01 PM Thanks a lot my friend for visiting my page and for your lovely comment. Loved always,bl

Jan Allison September 4, 2014 at 4:09 PM baby... maybe great footles once you start you cant stop they are addictive to write LOL :-) Hugs jan Jan Allison September 4, 2014 at 4:20 PM i meant they maybe may have a baby LOL so maybe.. baby for next footle :-) Bl Devnath September 4, 2014 at 4:18 PM One thing, I am babe not baby,Please. Bl Devnath September 4, 2014 at 4:17 PM Perhaps you are right but I shall try to control myself not to be addictive,my lovely friend. Smile always.... Loved always,bl