New Blood-15

(Oneness)

The peace loving lake 
Backed by misty cloudy hills 
Looked divine with the raindrops 
Diving in  
Its transparent soluble roof.

With  open arms,
The lake welcomes its cool guest
Making room for the widely travelled
Visitor from the skies.

The guest enjoys the abundance
In its newly found home
Enjoying the hospitality 
Of the rippling waters
Looking like translucent dancers.

Surfing up and down 
On the mild gusty waves
It ultimately rises in confidence
And braves to vanquish its new kingdom
Simply by merging into Oneness.



October 26, 2015
Contest: 15
Sponsor: Casarah Nance
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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August 20, 2015 at 6:55 PM
Hi Balveen, Congratulations --- Always ~LINDA~
Cheema Avatar
August 21, 2015 at 4:29 AM
Thanks Linda!
A  Avatar
August 17, 2015 at 3:01 PM
Balveen, Congratulations with your wonderful win! **SKAT**
Cheema Avatar
August 17, 2015 at 8:21 PM
Thanks Skat!
A. Sharma Avatar
August 17, 2015 at 9:33 AM
Sorry having spelt wrong Balveen!
Cheema Avatar
August 17, 2015 at 12:36 PM
Don't worry!
A. Sharma Avatar
August 17, 2015 at 9:32 AM
Very wonderful imagery n use of metaphors compliment Bavleen! Congrats on awesome win!
Cheema Avatar
August 17, 2015 at 12:27 PM
Thanks for your appreciation, Upma!
Dietrich Avatar
August 15, 2015 at 12:11 PM
Lovely metaphor of lake as house! congrats for your win.
Cheema Avatar
August 17, 2015 at 12:31 PM
Thanks Andrea for appreciating the metaphoric conquerer!
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