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New Beginnings Mia

New-borns are the Epitome of new beginnings With whole lifetimes ahead of them. Bright futures await Everyone who seizes opportunities Given to them Instead of focusing on minor disabilities. New Year’s Days always remind us of New starts, and Invites us to make New Resolutions to make our futures better. Granted, a new page is always blank So, it is up to us to fill it wisely. Revised with message Especially for “Message in An Acrostic 2” Poetry Contest Sponsored by Kim Rodrigues

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Date: 8/30/2021 6:43:00 PM
"New Year’s Days always remind us of New starts," This is for sure! And why don't we do this every month?
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 8/30/2021 7:20:00 PM
Good idea. Why don't we? Perhaps it's because we make a big hype out of New Year's.
Date: 8/29/2021 8:53:00 AM
This is nice, I like how you navigated your pen around new beginnings...Delice
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 8/29/2021 9:41:00 AM
Thank you so much, Delice.
Date: 8/28/2021 7:29:00 PM
Very True, Good luck with the contest. Hope you have a lovely new day.
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 8/28/2021 8:08:00 PM
Thanks so much, Shirley. I'm glad you got the "message."
Date: 8/28/2021 6:24:00 PM
You are correct, Milton, every year, new promises but never accomplished; this is a profound poem with wonderful messages about our future generation that we need to take good care of. Best wishes with the contest.
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 8/28/2021 7:19:00 PM
Thank you so much, Lasaad. It was fun doing it.
Date: 8/28/2021 4:46:00 PM
I love the comparison of new beings and new years to blank pages. You are right; they need to filled oh so wisely.
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 8/28/2021 7:19:00 PM
Thank you, Linda. I appreciate your comment.
Date: 8/28/2021 2:29:00 PM
Wise words, Milt. Not helped that my tablet displayed the ‘i’ poorly, so I was wondering what babes narms were. Spotted the ‘i’ eventually and all made sense. Good luck in Kim’s contest. Terry
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 8/28/2021 7:20:00 PM
Thank you, Terry. I hope Kim doesn't have the same problem you did. Have a great weekend.

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